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Addictive man

Updated on June 21, 2015

Lost in a trans...

I"m infatuated with your voice, it draws me in like bait...

My thoughts of you flutter my mind like an out of control obsession...

My desire of wanting to see you, is like a sexual appetite that's always hungry for more...

Whatever it is that's so electrifying, its simple irresistible...


Written By: Elizabeth Rivera


( That one kiss from that one person that sends chills threw your body)



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    • Queenlizzybeth profile image
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      Elizabeth Rivera 2 years ago from Bronx NY

      Thank you... Love can affect and hit people in different ways.. Love to me is the most amazing feeling in life...

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      Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

      Hi Elizabeth,

      Welcome to HubPages! Jodah is right, for you do pack a lot of desire in so few words, which is a sign of a great writer.

      It is so interesting about writing of a man's voice, for it is usually the men who love the woman's voice for some reason. Well, so many love different accents from around the world. When I first read your title, I thought you were writing about an addicted man loving a woman's voice.

      You are a wonderfully passionate writer.

      Up ++++ and away

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      Elizabeth Rivera 2 years ago from Bronx NY

      Thank you Jodah.. I really appreciate that.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi there queenlizzybeth, first let me say I love your name. This poem was short but packed a punch. You portrayed desire in so few words. I would be ecstatic if a lady wrote this poem to me. Well done and welcome to Hub Pages.

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