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Adonis Mine

Updated on July 7, 2011

How is it, you want me

One such as you

As if in a dream you rise

Adonis from the mist

Appearing from latent fantasies

Secret wishes from my youth

Before there were compromises

Not forgotten, just waiting

Biding your time

You come to me now

Deeming me ready

Afraid to blink or breathe

Stunned and dreamy

How can I

Weak with hunger

Whatever your desires

Do anything but comply


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    • Randy Behavior profile image
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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Whether he is the spitting image of my school girl fantasies or purely a trick my minds is playing on me... color me happy. Thanks for stopping by Nell.

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      Nell Rose 8 years ago from England

      Hi, I wrote a poem years ago with a similar title, God know where i put it! but my point is you may be looking at the picture but the man in your head is the one you are seeing. lucky thing! ( I think this because this is what happened to me, could'nt get him out of there if I tried!) nice one. Nell

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Have you been spying on me MFB?

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      MFB III 8 years ago from United States

      That's one washboard a girl is not going to scrub any clothes on, a six pack to share on a nightly basis, I'll bet you feel as if there's a smile tattooed on your face whenever he takes off his shirt.LOL!~~~MFB III

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      I'm glad you like my stuff Wesley.

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      wesleycox 8 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      Very nicely done. I like it very much.

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      Am I dead, yet? 8 years ago

      Will do =D

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks AIDY. Let me know if you find any more videos that are perfect match for my poems :)

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      Am I dead, yet? 8 years ago

      one 'sweet' lookin' and fiercely written poem follows another...Randy, again, fierce!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Oh gosh Invictus, I'm so glad you like it.

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 8 years ago

      This is so HAWT! wow. :)

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Happy to make you smile Jess.

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      Jess Killmenow 8 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

      Lovely steamy poem. Big smiles from the peanut gallery :)

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      No, thank you rdfrank! You and your self portraits are a lovely inspiration.

      Dohn I'm so glad you like my poetry, although I think I've written "hotter" than this.

      Nice to see you Shamel. I'm glad you appreciated the comply line. :)

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      shamelabboush 8 years ago

      A poem on fire again by RB! Fantastic specially the closure line...

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      dohn121 8 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

      This one's really hot...Like lava oozing out of a volcano in the middle of summer at high-noon! (Maybe I still got this)

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      rdfrank67 8 years ago from Seattle

      I think this is my favorite so far....thanks for using my pictures in your hubs :)