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After the Rain

Updated on December 5, 2015

after the rain

like magic

the sky turns

many different hues

of rose across the sky

the air

full of electricity

the energy is crisp

seeping into your pores

feeding you from within

so romantic

the sun setting

in a perfect ellipse

through the silence

you hear the many crickets

while a thousand dreams

fill the air

hearing the whispered hopes

of each one melting through you

the little glowing lights surround you

like a perfect orchestrated dance

In this summer's dream

left to bask in the

beauty of all

the romance

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      Caroline Marie 21 months ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you very much Kristian. :)

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      Kristian Režić 2 years ago from Split

      Hi Caroline;) your poem is so wonderful! I think I'll never stop admiring nature and its beauty!!

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      Caroline Marie 2 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Sky for your kind words. It is nice to see you. Yes, this was a special one written right after a walk after the rain. :)

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      sky9106 2 years ago

      another beauty here Caroline , I chose times to read you work , especially after seeing the name you chose ...as you do best its again filled with your special words and I can pick from any of many ...I love this ....

      left to bask in the

      beauty of it all

      Very nice ...speak soon..bless.

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Wayne. :)

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Beautiful work Caroline.

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you so much Jim! Yes, it was a very private and intimate experience. :)

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      James W. Nelson 3 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Such a beautiful poem, Caroline, and it seems you enjoyed the scene just by yourself, and sometimes being alone is the best way to experience and enjoy something.

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Blossom for stopping by and reading. I love the smell too. :)

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      I love that smell of the earth after rain. Lovely poem.

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Hi Frank, thank you I am glad that you liked it. :)

      Hi Brtbell thank you for your kind words and for reading. :)

      Hi Nyamache for reading and for your lovely words. :)

      Hi DealForALiving thank you for your kind words and for reading. I am glad you liked it. :)

      Hi Ruby thank you for your kind words. I am so glad you liked it. :)

      Hi Lady thank you so much for reading and your comment. I am glad that you liked my little poem. :)

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      Joanna Chandler 3 years ago from On planet Earth

      Very cute depiction of after the rain :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I love the calmness after a rain, reading this gave me the same feeling. Beautiful!

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      Sam Deal 3 years ago from Earth

      This poem is so true and so wonderfully written. I've enjoyed reading it very much.

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      Joshua Nyamache 3 years ago from Kenya

      This is beautiful. I like the words you have used.

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      Randi Benlulu 3 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      So lovely! You've captured the essence of "after the rain"

      "while a thousand dreams

      fill the air

      hearing the whispered hopes

      of each one melting through you"

      Up++ Thank you!

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      wow, i like it...:)