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Afternoon Sun: A Poem

Updated on March 4, 2014

The lazy rays of the sun gravitate to me,

Peeking through the trees,

Shining through my window,

I look towards the light,

As the golden glow dances across my face,

Illuminating my reverie,

And warning of the day's closing.



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      Randi Benlulu 3 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Pretty! I could acrually feel the sun as I read your words! Up+ Thank you!

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      ahorseback 3 years ago

      Sometimes I wonder if I'm weird about such things , I love the visuals that nature provides me , my moods tend to dance among the shadows and auras of light . Well done Girl !.....Ed

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      Audrey Hunt 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Hi Erin - This is just magnificent. "As the golden glow dances across my face." Thank you and sharing. ~ Audrey