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All Gone

Updated on February 2, 2015

All gone

Even me

Nothing stayed too long

After you

Pendulum

My dear

Swept dry leaves and

Savagely some stones, too!

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      jhamann,

      What a lovely comment.I appreciate it so much.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

      Today I am getting caught up James-Wolve. I have been feeling withdrawals and I am excited to become addicted again. Jamie

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Jodah,

      Thanks for your lovely comment.I appreciate it. HAVE A WONDERFUL SUNDAY !

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      AudreyHowitt ,

      Thanks for reading this scribble and so glad I'm that you loved it.

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      First I've read of your poetry. This is stripped back to bare bones but gets the message across effectively that way. Impressive.

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      I love the grittiness here--

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      suzettenaples,

      Thanks so much for your visits.I love it when you drop by !

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Ryem,

      Thanks so much for your visit.Love your comments.

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Carrie,

      Thanks so much for your lovely comment.I will try to do my best here!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Lisa,

      Thanks so much for the comment.I appreciate it so much !

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Faith,

      Thanks for dropping by.I hope you are mighty fine.Have a nice day there!

      Hugs

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      Ryem 3 years ago from Maryland

      You said so much in very few lines. Excellent poem!

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      Kept private 3 years ago from Northeast United States

      Meaningful and deep without skipping a beat :). Thank you for sharing

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      Lisa VanVorst 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Short, sad and to the point.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Dramatic poetry. Excellent as always.

      Blessings

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      Suzette Walker 3 years ago from Taos, NM

      Sad but interesting poem. I like the image of the pendulum - very creative!