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Always Daddys girl

Updated on September 25, 2012

It's late in the evening
As I walk down the stairs
I look into your bedroom
But I know that your not there

I pray that they can hear us
Our dreams and all your plight
To bring us back together
And do something that is right

So I want you to know that
Wherever in this world
You call for me
And I'll be there
You're always Daddy's girl


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      Laura 5 years ago

      Can almost feel ur pain...... Rest assure she will always be daddy's girl.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Wow this your comments are really getting so motivated to write more hahaha...........I am sure that if you recognise the love I have for my daughter through my poems it's means how wonderful your Father must be and believe me (As a Dad) you will never be out of his thoughts :)

      Thanks for this amazing and truly heart warming comment........and for the rest right back at ya !!!

      Simba xxx

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 5 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      So sweet poem for a little sweetheart. Every girl indeed should be a daddy's girl. I am my papa's girl too. But now, I am distant by oceans from him. I'm in Canada and he is still in the Philippines. I miss my pa and being close around him. I follow him around you see even to his guava tree. *sigh*

      By the way, Savannah is a very beautiful name. You are a good daddy because you can write your feelings like this. I admire men who write poetry and scribble their thoughts into a greeting card, not leaving the card empty. And this those men with a child. And you are one.

      Cheers and flying kisses coming your way...with Canada stamps, lol!!!

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Thanks Trav,

      She is everything in my world :)


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      Ireno Alcala 5 years ago from Bicol, Philippines

      Your daughter will always be daddy's girl. It's a special bond that I'm still puzzled of. :)

      Nice poem.:)

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK


      I too am genuinely touched that you have felt something from this, all my work is narrative and the pain for me is real, so god bless you my friend.

      thank you from my heart.


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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      I am touched, God bless you.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Gypsy Rose Lee,

      Those are the kindest words I have received on here, it really means a lot that you see inside my poems, and relate to them :)

      Thanks again

      Simba x

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Such a devoted daddy. I love these poems you write to your daughter. You write them and I drop tears. I'm a daddy's girl and sadly I lost my dad when I was only 10 and he was 61. I came into this world very late but was very much loved. I'll send up prayers so that you and your darling daughter can be together for many, many moons.

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      P. Thorpe Christiansen 5 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

      Lovely and sad. Little girls and their daddies have a very special bond - good for you for being there for her.

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      Girls are special to their daddys and daddys are special to little girls. Never let go, Simba! I know. I have my own story......

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Beautiful poem for a beautiful girl :) She is indeed very lucky!

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      Ryem 5 years ago from Maryland

      This is a beautiful poem. Your little girl is very lucky to have that love and devotion from you.

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      Victoria Lynn 5 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      So sweet. It shows your devotion for sure!

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      Randi Benlulu 5 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Sweet! She will truly appreciate all that you do for her!

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Tammy thanks for your comment it makes me feel Great !!! And I will always love you for giving me that song :) x


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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Unknown spy thank you so much she makes it beautiful !!!!


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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      i love this hub. very beautiful.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK


      She is a mimi me in every sense thanks so much, LOL sorry you got me squinting at the picture now and as my eyes go out focus she turns into a smaller version of me !!!! try it please !!! :):):)


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      sminut13 5 years ago from singapore

      this reminded me of my dad and how other people always say that i'm like my father not only in looks, but also in temperament and thoughts. thanks for a sweet hub.

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      Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

      This is really beautiful and touching. Every little girl should be a Daddy's girl. Your heart shines through your poem. Love it!