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An Open Mind It's Time (Poem)

Updated on January 23, 2015

An Open Mind It's Time

With an open mind, is a true key of being free.

With a ceased mind, is a true way of atrocity.

Which do you choose? You have a point to declare.

Forget your holy innocence, no-one even cares.

It's just you, alone in this little body.

Search deep and you'll find out you're lost in a crumbled lofty.

It's time to choose, ceased or free?

I leave you a question, but I hope for you to redeem.


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      PoeticPhilosophy 3 years ago from Canada

      lol very true, I hope they all work on seeing different point of views and not to "stick" with the any of them. Thank you for the comment :)

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      Kari Shinal 3 years ago from Fayetteville, NC

      Hard to find people with truly open minds. So much in them that the door gets jammed Shut! Thank you for the reminder.

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      PoeticPhilosophy 4 years ago from Canada

      Thank you Meher I hope it is too haha.

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      Meher Yar Khan 4 years ago from Pakistan

      Nice Poem. I sincerely hope mine is an open mind :P hahaha

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      PoeticPhilosophy 4 years ago from Canada

      Haia I love that phrase James! And thank you Rose and it truly is.

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      rose-the planner 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

      An awesome poem! I believe that having an open mind is essential in life. Thank you for sharing. (Voted Up). -Rose

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      A mind is like a parachute. It doesn't work if it is not open haha