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An Other Score

Updated on July 27, 2013

After the foam
She becomes
as red as a rose
with petals still on fire
wanting more
and leaves all aglow
wishing soon another score.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      Interesting short poem. Jamie

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      jhamann,

      Thanks so much for the visit and comment.

      Have a wonderful weekend!

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      a poem is a poem .. words with many meanings and it is in the way the readers interpret them ... I like this short work of art .

      Michael

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Michael,

      Thanks so much for the comment.

      Have a nice weekend!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hmm...I wonder what this one is about? lol! Tidy little verse James( I saw it the other day, but didn't get a chance to comment).

      I hope life is treating you well;

      Best wishes,

      R.Q.

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Romeos Quill,

      It is about a woman in bed wanting an other round haha

      I am okay,Thanks for asking!

      Have a nice day there!

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      My Gentle, little passionate Wolf you! lol... Wow, this is actually an awesome piece. I read it twice! I love the title, I loooove the words and I gotta hand it to ya with the picture :D

      I'm sharing this puppy! As I always do! :D

      Hugs to you!

      Cat

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      dreamseeker2 3 years ago

      Makes you want to kick the ball, doesn't it? : ) Cute poem...short, but entertaining. Voted it up!

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      Ouch... lol ... Okay, I'm leaving now :D

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Wonderful as always and voted up. Have a great day my brawd.

      Eddy.

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Cutest Cat,

      Thanks so much for your beautiful input and sharing.I am glad to hear that you liked it:)

      Have a wonderful day there!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Eddy,my chwaer,

      Thanks for the visit and the vote.Wish you good day there too!

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      LailaK 3 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      I like this poem! Short and entertaining :D Voted up!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Laila,

      Thanks for the visit and comment.Do you read my Syrian revolution poems?

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      LailaK 3 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Not yet, James. Sorry I've been away for a little bit. I will surely look into them :D

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      It s okay.I hope you are doing fine.

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