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And it was Dawn

Updated on February 24, 2011

Night is gone and there was no sleep

Conflicted voices wrestle within

Sliding under the sheets he feels her warmth

Engulfed in comfort, like the drink so long not known

A soft exhale, gently turning towards the ensuing grey

A touch of toes stirs beneath

The sound of birds taking flight

And it was dawn

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    • MordechaiZoltan profile image
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      MordechaiZoltan 5 years ago

      Thank you for your comment Scarface. Sadly there is nothing but emptiness now, at least I got a poem out of it. Cheers!

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      Scarface1300 5 years ago

      Short and sweet but says everything you need it to. Billiant

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      MordechaiZoltan 6 years ago

      Thank you for your comment.

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      lmmartin 6 years ago from Alberta and Florida

      I think you've found your forte in poetry. Very beautiful.

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      MordechaiZoltan 6 years ago

      Thanks Nikkigurl!

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      this was short and sweet. sleepless nights suck but waking next to the one you love is always a plus. playing footsie under the sheets, makes u wanna stay in bed all day

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      MordechaiZoltan 6 years ago

      Thank you very much tnderhrt!

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      I like this alot! Paints quite a picture, with a few well chosen words. Voted up and awesome!