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Annie's ship returns- Short Story Fiction

Updated on March 3, 2016
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I am a writer of poetry and fiction. I especially love flash fiction. My name is Ruby, and I live in Southern Illinois. I am a retired R.N.

" Annie it's time to wake up, breakfast is ready. "

Annie remembers being on fire with wanton desire as she stood by the sea-side, watching her lover, Victor board the ship that would take him far away to a raging war.

The year was 1941. He turned and blew her a kiss into the wind. She held on to it until her hand became so crippled, she had to let it go.

Years passed without a word. She wondered if the ship went down at sea, or did he die from artillery fire, his body buried at sea?

The years passed. She never missed a day walking down to the sea-side. With age came the crippling rheumatoid arthritis. Walking became almost impossible without the hand walker.

She turned and walked back up the winding hill to a place she'd lived the past five years, The Rest Haven Manor nursing home.

She waited patiently for her nightly medication that allowed her to return to a time before the war.

Victor was her only lover. They talked about marriage but decided to wait until the war was over. In her dream they were together chasing each other on the beach, building sand castles in the sand. Their nights were full of passionate kisses and ecstasy.

" Annie time to wake up, breakfast is ready. " She reluctantly let the aide help her get dressed for another boring day. After breakfast she walked down the hill to feel the sea-breeze on her wrinkled face.

She heard her name " Annie " She saw a ship in the distance and Victor was holding out his arm's and smiling. He looked exactly the same, young and so handsome. She started walking toward him. She looked down at her hand's holding the walker. They were young and beautiful. His ring on her third finger, left hand sparkled from the glow of the sun. She hadn't worn it for years because of painful swelling, He reached out and held her in his arms. They were together again. Time had stood still.

The evening news reported, " Annie Mc Daniels a ninety year old resident of The Rest Haven Manor nursing home apparently drowned. Her walker found floating at sea-edge. Attempts to locate the body, unsuccessful. What a tragedy!

Or was it?

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      Eric Dierker 17 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Victor took her home again. Beautiful, simply beautiful.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 17 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Eric. A story full of fantasy, I'm thrilled you thought it was beautiful. Your comment makes me happy. Thank you...

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      Eric Dierker 17 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Ruby -- just look at the love. Now your comment makes me happy. What a cool world.

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      Clive Williams 16 months ago from Nibiru

      nice little romance there

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      I agree Eric. We do live in a cool world where friends reach out across the universe to support friends. Isn't this a great community of writers? Much love and respect my preacher friend.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Clive. Am I a hopeless romantic or not? LOL... So glad to see you.

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      mckbirdbks 16 months ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      What a nice love story. Anne and Victor together again. She waited by the seaside for his return. You are a romantic.

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      Chris Mills 16 months ago from St. Louis, MO until the end of June, 2017

      A sweet story, Ruby. Ninety years old? Yeah, that's the way to go. Well done Ruby.

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      DDE 16 months ago

      A beautifully written story and I admire good work such as yours.

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      Frank Atanacio 16 months ago from Shelton

      a wonderful different piece of fiction Always.. yeah I enjoyed it..:)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      What can I say? Mike, I'm a total romantic. Love is what it's all about. Annie grew old but her heart remained with Victor. Thank you...

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      MizBejabbers 16 months ago

      It is absolute beauty and very heart-stirring. There is beauty in death when one's soulmate beckons to take you home.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Cam. I'm glad you thought this story was well done. Thank you much...

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello DDE. I'm thrilled that you enjoy my stories. Thank you..

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Thanks Frank. I had a ball writing this piece of fiction. I'm wondering if I should have categorized it as flash fiction?

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Miz Bejabbers. I love your comment. " Beauty in death when one's soulmate beckons to take you home. " Beautiful! Thank you...

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      Shyron E Shenko 16 months ago from Texas

      Ruby, what a way to go, you know that I love Buck Owens - thank you for his song I love together again.

      This is a beautiful love story.

      Blessings to you my gem of a friend.

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      Bill Holland 16 months ago from Olympia, WA

      Ruby, you are a hopeless romantic, and that's just one reason why we all love you. Keep them coming, my friend, and I'll keep basking in their glow and warmth.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 16 months ago from Victoria, Australia

      What a delightful little story! Thanks for sharing.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Shyron, I'm happy to learn that you love Buck. I do too. And glad you liked my love story. Thank you..

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Bill, I will admit that I am a hopeless romantic. Thank you for such a sweet comment. Thank you...

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Thank you for your delightful comment Blosson...Happy to share.

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      Maria Jordan 16 months ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Dear Ruby,

      I agree the hopeful and romantic style of your writing is 'like a breath of fresh air' in a world filled with...well, the opposite many a time...

      You have crafted a dream come true in this sweet story - always weaving your nursing through your lines for credibility.

      Love this and you too, mar

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Mar. Only another nurse would notice the weaving of the dreaded ailments that so many of the elderly have to contend with. Your comments are ' like a breath of fresh air ' to ' me ' soul. Thank you and I love you too..

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      Martie Coetser 16 months ago from South Africa

      Oh, how sad! Or is it? Oh, the poor woman. 90 years on this planet, spending almost all of it longing for one man? You managed to provoke an assortment of emotions with this story, dear Ruby!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Martie, I am glad you felt emotional reading this. I loved writing it. Thanks dear friend...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 16 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      No tragedy. Lovely and romantic story. As they say journeys end in lovers meeting.

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      Hari Prasad S 16 months ago from Bangalore

      Ruby,

      Wait is a sweet poison.

      Excellent short and lovely story.

      - hari

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Rasma. I agree with your comment. Loved it. Thank you..

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Hari, " Wait is a sweet poison " Beautiful!! Thank you my friend...

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      Nell Rose 16 months ago from England

      How beautiful! I am so glad they were reunited! lovely story Ruby.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hi Nell. Thank you for the lovely story comment. I am so glad you enjoyed. Thank you...

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      manatita44 16 months ago from london

      Beautifully done! Well, a great way to go. Holding on to hope and a brief promise towards the end. Nice ending.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello manatita. So glad you enjoyed my fantasy tale of lost and found love. Thank you...

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      Faith Reaper 16 months ago from southern USA

      Aw, I so glad I found this one, as I missed it when you first published it!

      What a lovely story with a happy ending in my book, Ruby. Well, she never gave up hope for her love to return for her and he did!

      Wonderful read.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Theresa. I guess when you truly love someone you will wait a lifetime. So happy you enjoyed. Hugs...

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      Tammy 16 months ago

      Oh Ruby that was a beautiful story! Love the ending

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Tammy. Thank you for the beautiful comment. This story is on the fantasy side, but I loved writing it. Love and hugs..

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      Shauna L Bowling 16 months ago from Central Florida

      Wow, Ruby! What a love story! You've left plenty to the imagination in this wonderful tale. Just enough to tease but not so much that more words are needed.

      Great story!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 16 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hi Shauna, your critique of my story is wonderful! Thank you. I love writing the unexpected ending. My preference is reading short stories. I can't imagine reading a book anymore. My attention span has certainly shortened since writing on HP. Thanks again.....

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      High Flyer 13 months ago from Pakistan

      Touching story with a touching ending!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 13 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello ABCKamran, happy you thought this far-out fiction was touching. Thank you...

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      Tamara Yancosky 3 months ago from No Idea Where

      Gave me chills...Lovely post.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Tamara, sorry I'm so late, I've had family visiting, just now got back on the computer. So happy you liked my story. Thank you much....

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      Lisa Williams 7 weeks ago

      I love this! Such a mysterious romance. I hope they are spending eternity on a lovely beach, basking in each others company, at last!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 7 weeks ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Lisa, I'm thrilled that you liked my story. I loved writing it! Thank you so much...

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