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Arrows from you lips

Updated on March 16, 2013

This poem is dedicated to two very good freinds of mine that I am privalliged to know... Su and Vik

I cannot help but feel it

As you smile hands upon your hips

Your words sweeter than honey

Whilst cupid's shooting arrows from your lips


I've never been so happy

To be stood in the pouring rain

Now that I know you love me

And that you know the same


Lets kiss now and forever

And live soaked to our bones

For it's only now in your arms

That my heart will feel home


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      Marie Williams 5 years ago from Dallas, Texas.

      Simba, I really like this piece. Love is so precious and you expressed it so well. Thanks.

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      Jon 5 years ago from UK

      Dunno ??? lmao how come we never even thought about it !!! crazy !!

      Hang on I will email my link XXX

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      Awwww! This is so romantic. (How come we're not FB friends?)

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      Jon 5 years ago from UK

      Thanks GRL !!

      I got to check my stuff a bit more tbh :)

      Great to see you !!

      Simba XX

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. So very romantic. Loved this.

      P.S. Change Arrows from you lips to Arrows from your lips

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      Jennifer 5 years ago from New Jersey

      I do! Sometimes at 2am!!!

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      Jon 5 years ago from UK

      Theatre girl when it happens grab you pen straight away !! That's the ultimate muse whispering in your ear :)

      Love Simba x

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      Jennifer 5 years ago from New Jersey

      Simba, I have been lucky enough to have written poems that way. I believe that they are gifted to us;)

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Lincolnshire, U.K

      Gotcha!...even nicer.

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      Jon 5 years ago from UK

      Hey tobusiness thanks for reading and to answer your question the full names would be Surya (girl) and Vikram (boy) to wonderful freinds who are soon to be married :)

      Simba X

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Lincolnshire, U.K

      Hi Simba, a beautiful love poem, but I'm some what confuse; you dedicated this to two ladies?

      Nice!

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      Jon 5 years ago from UK

      Theater girl thank you so much, I tell you the truth one line just appeared in my head and I built the rest around it :)

      Simba X

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      Jennifer 5 years ago from New Jersey

      This is truly wonderful;)

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      Jon 5 years ago from UK

      So I had to !!!

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      Jon 5 years ago from UK

      Like I said on FB it seemed to fit right in, at the right time not to dedicate it to you guys :)

      Love Jon

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      Surya 5 years ago from stoke-on-trent

      trust me jon .. im all smilin readin ths.. jus love it.. loved the caption.. u rock.. u make us feel so spl.. love u.. and yuppiee thanks.

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