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As She Tantalized

Updated on February 22, 2011

Her hips were swaying to the beat

Long  sexy legs captivated

All the men in the room held mesmerized

Eyes closed head titled back her body moved

In fluent motion she licked her hot pink lips

Letting the music be her lover

Making love to her as she

Bumped and grind, gyrated her hips

Her hand ran down her thighs inviting


She moaned as the music took over

No one could take their eyes off of her

Beautiful vision,



Dynamic personality

Inside she was poison wine

But that didn’t stop the men

From wanting her

They lusted in their hearts

Watching from a distance

Some who were bold enough to approach

Felt like king of the world

When they got her attention

A coy smile on her mouth

She knew her body was a spell

She cast so well

Pick and choose of any man in the room

Smoke filled atmosphere

Shot glasses slammed down on the bar

Someone shouting for another refill

Music screamed deafening ears

As her body tantalized

Asher body tantalized

As her body tantalized………….


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    • epigramman profile image

      epigramman 6 years ago

      ......well I so much loved this .....and what an excellent title too - wish I had thought of that one!

      Saddlerider (a fellow Canadian) and I are two lucky dudes to be able to read something this righteous and bold!!!!!! After reading this - I'd better stay up for awhile and have another glass of red wine!

    • Dim Flaxenwick profile image

      Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

      Hey.! This was great. What an atmosphere you created with words....

    • saddlerider1 profile image

      saddlerider1 7 years ago

      This was a tantalizing hub, all we need is a Pole in the middle of the dance floor for this long cool woman in her black dress to do her thing. Nicely erotic, enjoyed the music, I could hear it behind this scribe:0) Well done, bravo.