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"At Sea" a poem for travels

Updated on June 6, 2013
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We sail the very end of the ocean,

The sail that takes you to the open

Morning till night at sea we spoken

The way we smile it’s all we have taken



At sea we find beauty

The color of true vanity

A man with different perspective

Has always been the great on his objective



We seek peace on every corner

And the blue always been clearer

The waves represent the obstacles

Then the sun that had always been spectacles



The birds flew as they see,

The bright day that shine’s one’s flee

The life we endure is like a key

Without perseverance everything won’t be free



Love at sea is great

The smell of the nature felt state

The kiss of the wind that blows

Like a lover it shows my untold



Dark days can be at sea,

Clouds with thunders can be spree

But the days could be better

Just give faith and all that matter.



Free yourself at sea,

Be the one you always want to be

Tree of life feels so true,

As if at sea we never be blue.

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      kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Very nice poem, Paolo! The sea is always an inspirng theme :-) It's one of my favorite place to be!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Life on the ocean wave! A lovely poem about spending time on the sea.

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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 4 years ago from Philippine

      kidscrafts

      -Thank you, glad you like it! its nothing more better to be in the presence of freedom at sea. :-) literally its a great place to hang out with.

      BlossomSB

      - Glad you like it too") at sea is something so special and free in the feelings of everybody. So, if you're in rough time at sea would the best place to stop by.

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      Deonne Anderson 4 years ago from Florence, SC

      Lovely poem and description of life at sea. There is something that soothes the soul when we look out upon the sea.

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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 4 years ago from Philippine

      ladydeonne

      - thanks, yes it's something special that money can't even buy. It's all at sea. so. take while walk beneath it's warm/cold sea.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      PaoloJpm,

      I lost myself at sea reading this... and all I brought with me was my smile!

      This is beautiful PaoloJpm and I particularly appreciate it, for I have a deep love of the water... there is something magical that happens there.

      Voted up and others, sharing too!

      Cat

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      agapsikap 4 years ago from Philippines

      Beautiful... Inspiring. Sharing this wonderful piece.

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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 4 years ago from Philippine

      Cat

      -oh Cat, glad your back on my lands haha, anyway, I love sea so much too, and that magic can only be revealed when we're with it. the glow in each reflection of the moon, a special time where lives collides with fantasy. so happy I made you smile. :-) now you made me too.

      agapsikap

      - Thank you, no, you inspire me to write more with your beautiful words. thank you for sharing too. Let us all fall in love at sea.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      PaoloJpm,

      There've been times where I've stood in front of the water on a warm summer's night and in the silence, my eyes have teared up... there is definitely something magical about the water. Thank goodness it brings joy and laughter too!

      Cat

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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 4 years ago from Philippine

      Cat

      Yeah, like all our emotions can be release through time spending with the amazing water. specially at tough times, when everything we're mess up, just take a break and think about it, then you'll have the answer. It works, really. You can call me Pao for short Cat.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Pao,

      I wonder if everyone gets that connection? It is crazy how a moment in nature, something beautiful, especially water, can just kind of release all the bad and welcome in the good.

      Cat

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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 4 years ago from Philippine

      Cat

      - I don't know if some does not feel such pretty feeling with the water since we had experience it ourselves. By the way, you ever saw the movie "The Life of Pi"? That movie explains everything.

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      CraftytotheCore 3 years ago

      This is beautiful. The smell of the nature felt state. What a beautiful line and so true. I live near the coast and the smell of the ocean is so relaxing.

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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 3 years ago from Philippine

      CraftytotheCore

      - Gee, Glad you've find it beautiful. Yes, its refreshing feeling such nature force inside. I bet you've been enjoying those things great!

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