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Atmosphere: A Poem

Updated on January 8, 2015

When we're together,

All the valleys disappear,

In our own little world,

Up in the stratosphere,

I'll keep you warm,

If you keep me close,

We'll find faith and hope together,

And true love the most,

Though we stumble and fall down the mountain,

We'll pick each other up again,

And find our way to highest peak,

To find victory in the strain.



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      Erin Bower 3 years ago from Georgia

      BlossomSB: Thank you! That's a good way to describe it.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Working together and helping each other is so important and you have put it beautifully in your poem.

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      Erin Bower 3 years ago from Georgia

      Harishprasad: Thanks for voting and sharing! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

      CriSp: Thanks so much!

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Short and sweet and a very delightful read.

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India, New Delhi

      Erin, this is such a sweet poem and tells something special about love and togetherness. Voted up and shared.