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Love can affect us without a word.

Updated on November 15, 2012

Someone Can Paint a Smile on My Heart

You´re such a dream to look at.,

You warm the depths of me.,

Penetrating my heart and soul,

Yet you, nor anyone can see.


The sun can warm me outside,

and change the colour of my skin,

But what you can do is ´´something else´´

You warm me from within.

You move towards my heart,

and paint a smile on it.,

Then you reach my soul,

and give it such a lift.


l look into your eyes again,

You haven´t moved an inch

yet what affects ,

,you´ve made happen,

Deep inside of me.

BBG x

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Great to see you again. Tkank you for the compliment.

    Take care

    Dim

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    Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

    Very nicely expressed Dim Flaxenwick. Thumbs up! :)

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Great compliment. l really appreciate it. Thank you.

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    sonia05 5 years ago from india

    amazing poem,I loved it! Love can work wonders but here you are working wonders with your great writing and I am smiling...and so is my heart!!!

    cheers,

    Sonia

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    You spoil me with your accolades, my friend. Love you , man. Take care.

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    Micky Dee 5 years ago

    You're so beautiful Dim! God bless!

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Hi saddlerider. It´s made my day to think you feel mellow yellow. (remember that song, ? years and years ago?)

    love to think of you as blessed and warm. Thank you so much for your friendship and support.

    Love and peace. x

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Hello vocalcoach... Isnt´ funny how sometimes a short little heart felt poem can mean more than realms of writing.?,. Thank you so much for your comment.

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    saddlerider1 5 years ago

    Aw this brought sunshine into my soul, you lit up my life with this one and the HUGE SMILEY face, what more can I say I felt mellow yellow all over. You had me from painting a smile on my heart, I am truly blessed and feel warmth all over. Rated UP as awesome Dim...Wink and hugs

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    Audrey Hunt 5 years ago from Nashville Tn.

    Like the artist you are, you paint poetic words with just the right hues. I say "amen" to each comment left by your fans, of which I am the biggest! :)vocalcoach

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    What a wonderful comment, Teylina. Thank you so much.

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    Teylina 5 years ago

    These lines are awesome, and the smiley face so perfect! I've gotta share this with two loves: my son, because he loves that kind of love, those kinds of words, and smiley faces, and, weelll, --- someone special! 'paint a smile on my heart' and 'you warm me from within' -- how much better can it get?

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you Epi. Always cheers me when you visit my page.

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    epigramman 5 years ago

    ...and your 'love' of writing can surely (always) have an affect on me .....

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Yep! It sure is! Thank you for coming by my page and leaving a comment.

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    Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

    Hi Dim, 'you paint a smile on my heart' that is just so beautiful, this has to be about one very special person!

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Thanks d.william. l´m just on my way to read about schizophrenia on your page.

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    d.william 5 years ago from Somewhere in the south

    What a beautiful heart warming poem. Loved it. (certainly the opposite of mine). Thanks for sharing it with us.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Hello Alladream, That was a lovely compliment from an artist. Thank you.

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    Victor Mavedzenge 5 years ago from Oakland, California

    "You move towards my heart,

    and paint a smile on it." These are such beautiful lines.Maybe they captivated me because i am a painter-nonetheless, they are beautiful.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    What a lovely comment. Thank you. xx

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    DREAM ON 5 years ago

    Amazing and I can't take my eyes of the the yellow smile picture.You certainly spread the love.Thanks for being you.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Hello Sunnie, thanks so much.

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    Sunnie Day 5 years ago

    Ahhh this is really precious..I loved it..

    "The sun can warm me outside,

    and change the colour of my skin,

    But what you can do is ´´something else´´

    You warm me from within"

    I love those lines..thank you for sharing..

    Sunnie

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    l´m rather partial to that line, myself.

    Thanks so much for commenting,

    Take care.

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    Dynamics 5 years ago

    Wow! Dim Flaxenwick, this is hot! I like it a lot. Isn't love magical?

    My favourite line is "You warm me from within."

    Love this.

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