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Bodies on Fire

Updated on June 11, 2015

Entwined Flames

If I give myself completely

to you, Will I lose me?

Sometimes the feelings are

overwhelming, and yet I am free.

I can't breathe and I drown into you

and it is still pure pleasure.

Intoxicating and enticing

it is when we are together.

You put a smile on my lips

and a twinkle in my eyes.

It is all your doing and

little deaths I die.

The pounding of my heart

is loud and deafening.

When you say my name

it becomes an erotic whispering.

In your arms I am soaring

through the sky.

And yet as I look down my

feet are grounded and tied.

My body becomes feverish

and hot to the touch.

You are the fire, and it is

your burn I crave so much.

So hot, so hot, I am and

my water begins to boil.

I'm going to take you now it

is your body I want to spoil.

Burning and yearning

and we fall as one.

Your body, my body

glistening sweat and done.

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    • 4elements profile image
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      4elements 5 years ago

      Thank you very much Pink umbrella, I appreciate the comment and no I don't mind that you shared it. It is quite a comliment.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      also, hope you don't mind but i shared it on FB. everyone should see this.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Burning and yearning

      and we fall as one.

      Your body, my body

      glistening sweat and done.?

      that is my favorite part. i love this i don't usually do all that but im voting it up etc.

    • 4elements profile image
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      4elements 5 years ago

      Why thank you Mr. Secret. i do appreciate the comment. With everything I write I do try to put a little piece of me in them.

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      Secret lies 5 years ago from Redlands California

      THE WAY YO PUT YOURSELF INTO YOURSELF IS VERY EXCITINE, KEEP THE M COMING. i WANT MORE

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      4elements 5 years ago

      Thank you very much Writer20. That is what i was trying to portray in this collection of words. Blessings

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Passion there's nothing like it.

      Wonderful poem with your feelings all over it.

      Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      4elements 5 years ago

      Thank you sonya and rahul. I appreciate the comments. I was hoping to envoke passion , and how 2 sometimes can become 1. Blessings to you both. Peace, love, and light!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Burning and passionate... what true sayings about passion... nicely written!

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      Sonya L Morley 5 years ago from Edinburgh

      What a burning hot piece of poetry! It is a powerful feeling, being consumed by another and your poem evokes perfectly the bliss it can be. Good job!