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Bonded Souls
We are kindred spirits
From up and beyond
Souls that are bonded
Into one
As everyday I look into your eyes
I know that you are true to me
In our union there are no lies
We are forces of nature
Fire
Lightening
Rain
Cannot compare
To our entangled spirit
From up above
Our love is solid
A rock of fire
Carved deep
Into my heart's desire
We are tied together
Piece by piece
Bonded forever
Never to release
In gentle harmony
Swan lovers entwined infinitely
We will always stick together
At peace and content
To the end
We'll die together
This is a poem about soul mates and true love. Swans are known to mate for life. When one dies, the other stays alone for the rest of it's life.
Comments
And put together in your own special way. That's you spcial gift Caroline and I love how you fearlessly puts them together ,flowing like the Swans!
Great work.
Bless.
wow...such sweet poems, and it reminds of Tantric or divine love...only few can attain this but an everlasting bliss for those who found it...
This is such a wonderful poem. The love between soulmates is always forever.
Another beautiful poem, Caroline, and such wonderful pictures to illustrate. I knew swans mated for life, but I "didn't" know they would stay alone after a mate died. I've been alone now going on 15 years, and I no longer like it (if I ever did) but still...? By the way, you once mentioned I should do a hub about my experiences. I did do a whole book, but it's already online, so the parts I tried to put in a hub got red-lined. The title is "Dying to LIve"
I've filled my life with writing and gardening, but still...?
I voted beautiful, and that is the only comment I can make:
Beautiful.
Absolutely beautiful. Your writing is one of the reasons I love HUBS so much. Thank you. :)
I loved this Caroline..Swans are beautiful and so is your poetry..Thank you...
Oh, Caroline, what a lovely poem--having lost a true soulmate (2d time worked), it brought some terrific memories to mind, and the pictures were perfect. We used to go feed swans where we lived. I may just go on to bed on this one for some sweet dreams! Thanks so much for writing for beautifully and sharing.
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@ Thank you Sky for reading and your comment!
@ Raciniwa thank you for your lovely comment. It does sound like tantric love doesn't it?
@ Gypsy thank you!
@ SubRon thanks for commenting and sharing. I will look for your book!
@ DanielNeff thank you for reading and your comments.
@ Cheryl thanks I'm glad you liked this one. :)
@ Always Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
@ Teylina lucky you to have found your soulmate. How beautiful. I'm glad you liked my poem. :)
Caroline, Whomever he is
the man in your life
He is the luckiest guy in the world.
Great Hub,I am running out of words to praise your Poetry. Now you have given me a new Inspiration, Speechless.
Much Love
Michael
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Thank you Michael always for your kind words.
carolinemd21, Swans are the ultimate symbol of eternal love, and rightly so, with their elegance and beauty. I love the heart which they form so gracefully when they are beak to beak. Beautiful, elegant photos which convey the beautiful symmetry of a pair of swans. Did you take them? Each image differs in the play of light on water.
Your poem tells well of eternal love!
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Thank you Stessily for reading. Yes, swans are beautiful. No, I didn't take those photos. I wish I did. They are beautiful.
So touching, and that's something I didn't know about swans. Thanks for sharing. Loved the line "rock of fire."
I loved thematic treatment in the poetry. Images are fresh which give vitality to the very essence of the composition.
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@ Senoritaa thank you for reading and your comments!
@ Vinaya thank you for the kind words. :)
Caroline.. so beautiful I didn't know that about swans.. My mom and dad were together for 60 1/2 years. she just died in July. dad is so lost.
Great poem..
voted way up
Debbie
Soul mates, pure love, everlasting bond. It's so beautiful, Caroline! I have watched how swans move together as mates and they are really stunning creatures stuck to love and in love. Cheers! Sharing it too.
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Hi Debbie I am sorry to hear about your mom. I am sending my love. Thank you for the kind words. :)
Hi Coffee thank you for your lovely words and the share. :)
Absolutely beautiful, it gave me goosebumps. :)
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Thank you Qudsia :)
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