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Breath of Life

Updated on May 9, 2012

The weathered storm

Left nothing here

Drowned everything away

You are left alone

By yourself

Needing help

Lifeless you lay there

I am here to save you

Giving you

Breath of Life

Making you feel again

You

My little angel

Will be alright

You are not gone yet

You just need love

To be strong again

I will take care of the hurt

I will take care of the pain

The shaking will disappear

You are my angel

I will save you

From here

I will smile

When you can fly again

Up into the clouds you will go

The majestic sun beating down on

Your beautiful soul

You will be so happy

Crying with tears of joy

Every part of you will heal

You will be you once again

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Raciniwa :)

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      love these lines caroline...

      When you can fly again

      Up into the clouds you will go

      The majestic sun beating down on

      Your beautiful soul

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Tom hmmm... could be both good question.

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      tom hellert 5 years ago from home

      C21,

      Being someone stuc the literal part of reality this piece is about a bird that was knocked out of the sky by the storm. Or is it a veiled metaphor for a freind with a broken heart??

      Hmmmm, I wonder- sometimes it takes a few readings or 5 to finally (maybe) get it...

      TH

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Senoritaa :)

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      Senoritaa 5 years ago

      I can imagine so many things here, broken, shattered, helpless, which need just one healing touch. Wonderfully written as always Caroline.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Hi Billy thank you my friend for that lovely comment. I always appreciate you stopping by. :)

      @ XStatic thank you very much!

      @ Gypsy thank you for reading!

      @ Dexter thank you for stopping by!

      @ Avorodisa I didn't know that story. Thank you for sharing and thanks for reading.:)

      @ Frank thank you for your support!

      @ Cheryl thank you for reading!

      @ Ruby thank you so much!

      @ Oceanuniverse...I love that name thank you for reading!

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      oceanuniverse 5 years ago from California

      Very beautiful poem here.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Full of encouragement. When someone is down and needs a lift, I suggest they read this beautiful poetry...

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      Cheryl Simonds 5 years ago from Connecticut

      Very moving poem. I felt like you were talking to me for a bit. thanks for sharing

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      your poetry just amazes me voted up and awesome Caroline

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      Anna Sidorova 5 years ago from Russia

      Nice poem. Makes me think about one Egyptian myth. Fighting against her husband's brother, Seth, who killed Osiris, and cut him into pieces that he threw in the valley of the Nile river, Queen Isis collected the body of Osiris, made a mummy out of it and blew life in his nostrils thus resurrecting him. As if this was not enough, she turned herself into a female falcon, spread her wings out on the immobile body, pronounced a magic spell and got pregnant...

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      Dexter Yarbrough 5 years ago from United States

      A beautiful poem to start the day! Thank you!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Such sentimentality and love shining through the words.

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Well, I read a lot of Hubs, many poems, write some too, and this one is beautiful! (Awesome too)

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I'm pretty picky about the hubs I read and I'm not a big fan of poetry...having said all that I read every new poem you post so you should know that I think you are very good.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank very much Curiad. :)

      Thank you Michael. :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      very nice Caroline very nice.

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      Mark G Weller 5 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Beautiful words of love and support.