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Updated on June 13, 2017
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Life needs more

Breathing alone

cannot sustain the life

Not even a plethora

of glittering wealth

Life laughs at

the affectionate smiles

She needs hot passions

in the hearts

And dancing bubbles

of moments go by

Naughty moods

wine of carefree days

She needs a guy

who overlooks fights

who takes care of

in the face of storms

A friend who loves

to walk hand in hand

A strong guy who loves

rebuke and fun

Strive we must

to realize all our dreams

Love should be kept

intact in our heart


© Harish Mamgain






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      Ryan Fuller 6 weeks ago from Louisiana, USA

      Great work! Way to show true emotion and a great job on expressing those feelings. Cannot wait to read more. Keep up the great work.

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      John Hansen 6 weeks ago from Queensland Australia

      Wise words, Harish. Yes life does need all those things.

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      Harish Mamgain 6 weeks ago from India

      Thank you Ryan , glad you liked this little poem.

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      Harish Mamgain 6 weeks ago from India

      John, thanks for your visit and nice comments. Appreciate your kind words.

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      Bill Holland 6 weeks ago from Olympia, WA

      For sure, my friend. I would be lost without my loved ones.

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      Harish Mamgain 6 weeks ago from India

      Yes Bill, our loved ones are the real foundation of our life. Thank you for such affectionate words.

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      manatita44 6 weeks ago from london

      An emotional piece of great beauty. Sweet! Charming! Intelligently written.

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      Larry Rankin 6 weeks ago from Oklahoma

      Wonderfully written.

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      Harish Mamgain 6 weeks ago from India

      Manatita, dear brother, what more I need than such nice comments of a lovely poet. Thank you very much for your kind visit to this hub and for kind words.

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      Harish Mamgain 6 weeks ago from India

      Thank you Larry, glad you liked this hub. Ultimately, everything tilts towards love, my friend.

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      Eric Dierker 6 weeks ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Harish, this is wonderful. It made me think of my loved ones here at HP. And of course far more about my lover.

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      Harish Mamgain 6 weeks ago from India

      Yes Eric, it's all about loved ones and lovers. Thank you Sir, be in love always and be love. :-)

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      Linda Crampton 6 weeks ago from British Columbia, Canada

      I enjoyed the whole poem, but I especially like the last two lines. The advice is excellent!

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      Harish Mamgain 6 weeks ago from India

      Glad you liked this poem, Linda. Yes, about the last two lines , I myself ponder whether I will be able to retain that lovely spark of love inspite of life 's hard tests. Thank you for such kind words.

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      Ralph Schwartz 5 weeks ago from Idaho Falls, Idaho

      Very enjoyable and full of wonderful imagery of love and romance

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      Harish Mamgain 5 weeks ago from India

      Thank you Ralph, glad you liked it. Thanks for you kind visit and comments.

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      Shaloo Walia 5 weeks ago

      Life indeed would be pointless without loved ones. Lovely lines.

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      Harish Mamgain 4 weeks ago from India

      Thank you Shaloo, love is to life as soul is to body.

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      Chitrangada Sharan 4 weeks ago from New Delhi, India

      Nice expressions!

      That's what you want in a partner--love, support, understanding, to walk hand in hand and stand by each other in whatever situation life puts in.

      Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem!

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      Harish Mamgain 4 weeks ago from India

      Glad you liked this little poem. ChirangadaSharan, for forging a stable relationship, what more we need but a dose of mutual love, timely support to each other, and a little bit of craziness.

      Thanks for your visit and nice comments.

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      Devika Primić 3 weeks ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Time with loved ones is important and you show that in your writing.

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      Harish Mamgain 3 weeks ago from India

      Yes Devika, love is the top priority, everything is secondary. Thanks a lot for appreciating this poem.

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      Shyron E Shenko 2 weeks ago from Texas

      Hari, this is beautiful.

      Blessings my friend.

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      Harish Mamgain 2 weeks ago from India

      Thank you Shyron, I love your presence. Glad you liked it.

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