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Broken House

Updated on August 10, 2015

A child with black bags

Bags under his eyes

Eyes gleaming no more

More ore, more beauty

Beauty sleep ruined

Ruined by the never-ending hoots

Hoots daily in the house

House broken by the force-gale wind.


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      Clive Williams 20 months ago from Nibiru

      interesting.....broken sleep broken mind

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      Audrey Howitt 20 months ago from California

      Painful write--but you capture it so well

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      Ann Carr 20 months ago from SW England

      Love the rhythm and the final/first word repetition; clever.

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      Faith Reaper 20 months ago from southern USA

      Profoundly expressive as to brokenness ...

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      Frank Atanacio 20 months ago from Shelton

      a shattered family.. love it my friend :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 20 months ago from Morocco

      clivewilliams ,

      Thanks so much for the comment.

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      Hari Prasad S 19 months ago from Bangalore


      change is inevitable,

      inevitable are the winds.

      winds of change.

      - Hari

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      Tijani Achamlal 19 months ago from Morocco

      AudreyHowitt 7,

      Thanks so much.I 'm trying to explore other forms of poetry.

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