Broken House
A child with black bags
Bags under his eyes
Eyes gleaming no more
More ore, more beauty
Beauty sleep ruined
Ruined by the never-ending hoots
Hoots daily in the house
House broken by the force-gale wind.
Comments
excellent.
change is inevitable,
inevitable are the winds.
winds of change.
- Hari
a shattered family.. love it my friend :)
Profoundly expressive as to brokenness ...
Love the rhythm and the final/first word repetition; clever.
Painful write--but you capture it so well
interesting.....broken sleep broken mind
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