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Brown Eyed Angel
For seven years of my life
I was pulled through a living hell
By a brown eyed angel
The reason that I never fell
Into the flames of terror
That had become our life
But the flames still took their victim
Your Mother, my dear Wife
So maybe that's the reason
That we been torn apart
Perhaps you have a new quest
Again through hell you'll start
To fly above the flames once more
With your Mother in your arms
To bring her to salvation
With your pure heart and your charms
You wanted us together
But this you couldn't do
As brown eyed angels
Aren't that big
And they can't carry two
Comments
What a tragic story, yet you seem to share a seed of hope with your daughter. Thank you for sharing. Jamie
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Thank you so much Jamie, I always hope Jamie, not for the reunion with her Mother but for her Mum to recover and have a good life.
Thanks for reading :)
Simba
Jon, I hope the wishes driving this poem come true. Hopefully, Savannah's heart can bring her mom around. We can only hope and pray....
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Yep Shauna !!! if worst case happens I pray for this :)
Simba X
Voted up and beautiful. A wonderful poem. Your daughter is so beautiful your so lucky to have her. I wish the very best for you both and may you be together always.
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GRL again your comments put a lump in my throat ,
Thank you so much for your lovely words :)
Simba xxx
This is amazingly beautiful and it has touched my heart so deeply.....You express yourself from within your soul....Just amazing..UP++
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Fpherj48,
Thank you again I have just woken up to read some of you comments and they have touched me so much I am forcing back tears on a Monday morning, from the bottom of my heart I thank you
Simba xxx
Dear Simba, Where have you been before, I do not know, I have not come across you here on HubPages and that's my fault, ahahaha! I thank you for the luck I received from your visit to one of my hubs and from here, I have found you.
I have read your profile, and this poem now, I feel your pain. It is a terrible thing that happened. But, chin up my new Friend and look for an open cloud (this is one in my poems that lifts me up whenever I am down) to give you back beautiful unending hopes and to brave yourself. Just believe, whatever it may be.
Your girl is pretty and she has all her daddy's love! May you both continue to be together until the day you will walk your daughter to the altar, for another man whom she will share her life with.
Here's wishing for yourself too, Simba, a true loving heart that will bear fruits of your dreams. You will find her in your arms again, just believe. You wrote an awesome dedication for your little angel.
Take good care... ~Tess
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Tess,
Thankyou so much for these beautiful words of hope for me, really I cannot say how much they mean to me, I know that sound daft from somebody who writes but truly I can't find words fitting enough to thank you.......although it is words like your which shore up my strength to be the best Father I can in troubled days.
You have really put a huge smile on my face :)))))
Take care
Simba xxx
You'll do good! Here's sending you positive energies, better catch!
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Caught them Tess :)))
Simba xxx
Great! Now carry on...Have a good day!
Every daughter needs a father that loves her like crazy. Your daughter has that in you. Well done, and beautifully written.
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She sure does !!!
Thank you Duffsmom
love Simba X
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