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Brown Eyed Angel

Updated on September 30, 2012

For seven years of my life

I was pulled through a living hell

By a brown eyed angel

The reason that I never fell


Into the flames of terror

That had become our life

But the flames still took their victim

Your Mother, my dear Wife


So maybe that's the reason

That we been torn apart

Perhaps you have a new quest

Again through hell you'll start


To fly above the flames once more

With your Mother in your arms

To bring her to salvation

With your pure heart and your charms


You wanted us together

But this you couldn't do

As brown eyed angels

Aren't that big

And they can't carry two

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      What a tragic story, yet you seem to share a seed of hope with your daughter. Thank you for sharing. Jamie

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Thank you so much Jamie, I always hope Jamie, not for the reunion with her Mother but for her Mum to recover and have a good life.

      Thanks for reading :)

      Simba

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Jon, I hope the wishes driving this poem come true. Hopefully, Savannah's heart can bring her mom around. We can only hope and pray....

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Yep Shauna !!! if worst case happens I pray for this :)

      Simba X

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. A wonderful poem. Your daughter is so beautiful your so lucky to have her. I wish the very best for you both and may you be together always.

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      GRL again your comments put a lump in my throat ,

      Thank you so much for your lovely words :)

      Simba xxx

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      Paula 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      This is amazingly beautiful and it has touched my heart so deeply.....You express yourself from within your soul....Just amazing..UP++

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Fpherj48,

      Thank you again I have just woken up to read some of you comments and they have touched me so much I am forcing back tears on a Monday morning, from the bottom of my heart I thank you

      Simba xxx

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      Dear Simba, Where have you been before, I do not know, I have not come across you here on HubPages and that's my fault, ahahaha! I thank you for the luck I received from your visit to one of my hubs and from here, I have found you.

      I have read your profile, and this poem now, I feel your pain. It is a terrible thing that happened. But, chin up my new Friend and look for an open cloud (this is one in my poems that lifts me up whenever I am down) to give you back beautiful unending hopes and to brave yourself. Just believe, whatever it may be.

      Your girl is pretty and she has all her daddy's love! May you both continue to be together until the day you will walk your daughter to the altar, for another man whom she will share her life with.

      Here's wishing for yourself too, Simba, a true loving heart that will bear fruits of your dreams. You will find her in your arms again, just believe. You wrote an awesome dedication for your little angel.

      Take good care... ~Tess

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Tess,

      Thankyou so much for these beautiful words of hope for me, really I cannot say how much they mean to me, I know that sound daft from somebody who writes but truly I can't find words fitting enough to thank you.......although it is words like your which shore up my strength to be the best Father I can in troubled days.

      You have really put a huge smile on my face :)))))

      Take care

      Simba xxx

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      You'll do good! Here's sending you positive energies, better catch!

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Caught them Tess :)))

      Simba xxx

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      Great! Now carry on...Have a good day!

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      P. Thorpe Christiansen 4 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

      Every daughter needs a father that loves her like crazy. Your daughter has that in you. Well done, and beautifully written.

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      She sure does !!!

      Thank you Duffsmom

      love Simba X

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