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Business Casual in a Bag

Updated on April 30, 2011

We choose what we will carry 
Each item with a bewildered care 
Misunderstanding the concept 
Of weight 
Packing it mindfully 
In an unknown container 

Learning the meaning of 
"Heavy" 
We shoulder 
The weight 
Of what we
Ourselves 
Chose 

Before 
We know better 
We blame others 
If it is hard 
To bear 

Later 
We learn 
To adjust the straps 
Settle into the burden 
Teach our legs to pump out miles 
Regardless 

Still later 
We learn 
The weight 
Is fictional 
The burden 
Real only 
In our minds 

Finally 
We realize 
We are 
The burden 

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    • marlanasifter profile image

      marlanasifter 6 years ago from Sanford, NC, USA

      Hey, I loved this! The first poem I've read on this site with some understanding of where line breaks should be...

      You should add punctuation though.

      Nicely said at the end. We are the burden. Yes indeed.

    • Tom Rubenoff profile image
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      Tom Rubenoff 6 years ago from United States

      Thank you, marlanasifter. It is refreshing to get some actual criticism on HP.

    • G-Ma Johnson profile image

      Merle Ann Johnson 6 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      If that isn't the truth...well pointed out...:O) Hugs G-Ma

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      Tom Rubenoff 6 years ago from United States

      Thanks, G-Ma!

    • Micky Dee profile image

      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      Nicely done as always.

    • chspublish profile image

      chspublish 6 years ago from Ireland

      Clever and insightful.

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