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By The Water

Updated on July 18, 2011

Finger skimming a bare ripple

Across still water’s reflection

My desire overflows its cup

Droplets ringing like glass

Ripples rebounding in cross currents

In the silence


She darts away submerged in her world

Leaving me wishing that I could swim

Like that


Noticing the obstruction

I pull desire off with my hand

Jagged chunks like cinders

Come off with a slight ripping sound

Leaving little

Soon healed wounds


If you leave petrified desire

Attached to the spinning golden sphere

It is a blade that cuts the heart

And the memory of oneself

Until you are un-free

To love or be


The cinders of desire

Shine like little burned meteorites

Crashed into the bank of the healing river

Where she swims

Away so fast


The still water

And the lovely creature

Swimming there in my memory

I smile and walk freely

Into the forest

Of others


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    • Tom Rubenoff profile image
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      Tom Rubenoff 6 years ago from United States

      Ripples are an interesting phenomenon, aren't they? So simple, yet hypnotic to the eye and mind. Thank you.

    • QudsiaP1 profile image

      QudsiaP1 6 years ago

      Your description of ripples fascinated me. This was a beautiful piece.

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      K.A.E Grove 6 years ago from Australia

      A wonderful captivating read, Loved it!!

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      Dallas W Thompson 6 years ago from Bakersfield, CA

      Outstanding!~ Flag up and awesome.

    • Tom Rubenoff profile image
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      Tom Rubenoff 6 years ago from United States

      Thank you.

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      Binaya.Ghimire 6 years ago

      Beautiful composition, superb imagery, evocative metaphors.

    • Tom Rubenoff profile image
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      Tom Rubenoff 6 years ago from United States

      What could be better?

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      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      So I get to be wise and wet? Cool!

    • Tom Rubenoff profile image
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      Tom Rubenoff 6 years ago from United States

      I think there is no difference between the Wise and the Questioning. For if the wise do not question, they are not wise; and the questioning, by questioning, display wisdom.

      Thank you, wise one. :)

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      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Perhaps the forest is for the wise and the water for the questioning. You'll find me, like her, in the water! (loved this BTW)

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