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Climbing to the Mountain of Life : A Poem

Updated on July 5, 2017

Climb, climb, I pushed myself to climb

The mountain of life which I hope will become more kind

High I already go, but still there is no one to meet

Should I keep waiting, or it only myself the one I should reach?

It is indeed really hard to be found

The one like me, another half of mine

Traveling far, where I dragged myself from the ground

So far it seem only gave me pain to climb

Oh one, where life hidden your present?

I wish I can be strong to live with your absent

It is heart of mine that I can’t stand

Keep shouting to me loud, trying to blowing up my mind

Climb, climb, I pushed myself to climb

To wherever you are the one who should become mine

Will I finally able to find, still question mark that become primary sign

Can I reach you, oh my one?


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  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    9 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Muhammad Jamel Ahmed for the sweet words and Hope. Inshaallah, Brother, I'll pray to Allah.

    Jazzakallah Kairan. ^_^

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    Muhammad Jameel Ahmed 

    9 years ago

    "Love is the fountain of life

    Love is the flashing sword of death

    Love is God and God is love

    Learn to love and seek a beloved" well said the poet and you are doing your best to promote love of God and His creature in a beautiful way.May Allah bless you. May all your dreams come true. Think what is best, the best i wish for thee , this wish i have for you than ten times happy me.

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    9 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Shops, welcome to my Hub. Thank you for your kind comment, dear. I'm really happy because you like this. ^_^

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    9 years ago

    This is a lovely poem, I really enjoyed it, very inspiring. Great work Freya! :)

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    9 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    I love when my words can touch people heart. ^_^ Thank you, Moulik Mistry

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    Moulik Mistry 

    9 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

    Very inspiring poetry, it just touched my heart...

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    9 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hahaha... You don't look old on that picture of yours, Micky Dee. Thank you very much for reading this. The pleasure is mine to have you comment in here. ^_^

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    Micky Dee 

    9 years ago

    Here I am! Right here! Oh phooey! Too old again! Thank you very much. This is a very nice poem.

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    9 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Yes, Dohn, it's true. Story of mine... hmmm...

    Anyway, thank you for stopping by. It always good to found your comment in my works ^_^. I hope soon can achieve what you already win it with your gift. Still far for me to go! :(

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    9 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

    This was very inspiring. You're struggles are certainly evident here. Thanks for sharing this with all of us!


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