Castles of guilt
Guilt can burn the bridges
When your directions lost
Foolish words will feed the flames
And pain will be the cost
Guilt can build castle
To lock your heart away
Within those walls a prisoner
With the games guilt likes to play
It can eat into your reason
To tell you why it's there
Guilt can be so unjust
But around because you care
So slay unwelcome deamons
Corrupting soul and mind
They have a taste for beauty
Eating gentle hearts they find
Comments
Really like this poem. :) Keep up the good work! :)
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Hi Hattie,
Thank you I am so glad you liked it !!!
Great to see you pop in :)
Simba
Love it, beautifully written.
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Hey !! Duffsmom, Great to see you drop in and thanks for a lovely comment
Love Simba x
A very emotional poem. Sounds like a product of deep thought.
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Hey Art !!
How are you mate ??? thought it was time I started hubbing again !!
Yes this one did come from deep inside !!
Respect
Jon
Jon, this is awesome! We must dispel the demons in order for guilt to not be allowed in the forefront of how we conduct ourselves. Hearts are tender yet strong. Puff up the love and resist the guilt!
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Shauna,
I agree 100% miss placed empathy is also another cause which feeds this deamon!!!
love always
Jon x
Thank you for wonderfully displaying your perspective.
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Thank you Mhatter :)
It's a strange thing guilt and should not always pop it's head up !!
Simba
Brilliantly done it is ! Votes all up and shared.
Beautiful poem...... Thought provoking words, and so true!
Guilt can build a castle, to lock your heart away!!
Awesome :)
Not only a great write but also the messege is awesome and enlightening !.....Ed
Guilt is some kind of beast, isn't it. Lurking around and eating at your soul. Nice poems that sums up the beast.
Wow, I love the descriptions! It paints a beautiful picture in my mind!I voted up.
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Thank you you're comment has made it worthwhile :)
Simba
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You got it !! That's exactly what it does !
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Cheers Ed
Thanks for popping in
Simba
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Lathing lets untrao those souls !!
Simba
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Thanks so much for sharing
Simba x
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Thanks so much for sharing
Simba x
Wonderful writing!
What a marvelous piece of poetry!
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Forall thank you so much :)
Simba
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Unknownspy again thank very much for reading this peice
Simba
What a wonderful piece, makes your reader think...and that's a compliment for a soulful writer. It's beautiful.
Thank you.
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CrisSp ,
Coming from a soulful writter that is a wonderful compliment thank you so much !! :)
Love Simba XX
Well done Simba73, I will vote this one up, because I like this kind of poem.
Totally awesome. An amazing read yet again.
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Thost thank you my friend :)
Simba
A very astute meditation on guilt, and wonderful images to support it!
Blessings,
Reba
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Reba thank you so much for reading :)
Simba
Voted up and beautiful. Guilt is a difficult feeling indeed.
A wonderful poem Simba; you really have the gift of breathing life into your words. I am glad I came across you on here and look forward to so many more by you.
Enjoy your weekend.
Eddy.
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Eddy your comments make it such a pleasure to post on hubs !!!
Ditto have a wonderful weekend :)
Simba
Nicely done. Thumbs Up!
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