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Castles of guilt
Guilt can burn the bridges
When your directions lost
Foolish words will feed the flames
And pain will be the cost
Guilt can build castle
To lock your heart away
Within those walls a prisoner
With the games guilt likes to play
It can eat into your reason
To tell you why it's there
Guilt can be so unjust
But around because you care
So slay unwelcome deamons
Corrupting soul and mind
They have a taste for beauty
Eating gentle hearts they find
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Nicely done. Thumbs Up!
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Eddy your comments make it such a pleasure to post on hubs !!!
Ditto have a wonderful weekend :)
Simba
A wonderful poem Simba; you really have the gift of breathing life into your words. I am glad I came across you on here and look forward to so many more by you.
Enjoy your weekend.
Eddy.
Voted up and beautiful. Guilt is a difficult feeling indeed.
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Reba thank you so much for reading :)
Simba
A very astute meditation on guilt, and wonderful images to support it!
Blessings,
Reba
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Thost thank you my friend :)
Simba
Totally awesome. An amazing read yet again.
Well done Simba73, I will vote this one up, because I like this kind of poem.
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CrisSp ,
Coming from a soulful writter that is a wonderful compliment thank you so much !! :)
Love Simba XX
What a wonderful piece, makes your reader think...and that's a compliment for a soulful writer. It's beautiful.
Thank you.
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Unknownspy again thank very much for reading this peice
Simba
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Forall thank you so much :)
Simba
What a marvelous piece of poetry!
Wonderful writing!
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Thanks so much for sharing
Simba x
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Thanks so much for sharing
Simba x
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Lathing lets untrao those souls !!
Simba
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Cheers Ed
Thanks for popping in
Simba
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You got it !! That's exactly what it does !
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Thank you you're comment has made it worthwhile :)
Simba
Wow, I love the descriptions! It paints a beautiful picture in my mind!I voted up.
Guilt is some kind of beast, isn't it. Lurking around and eating at your soul. Nice poems that sums up the beast.
Not only a great write but also the messege is awesome and enlightening !.....Ed
Beautiful poem...... Thought provoking words, and so true!
Guilt can build a castle, to lock your heart away!!
Awesome :)
Brilliantly done it is ! Votes all up and shared.
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Thank you Mhatter :)
It's a strange thing guilt and should not always pop it's head up !!
Simba
Thank you for wonderfully displaying your perspective.
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Shauna,
I agree 100% miss placed empathy is also another cause which feeds this deamon!!!
love always
Jon x
Jon, this is awesome! We must dispel the demons in order for guilt to not be allowed in the forefront of how we conduct ourselves. Hearts are tender yet strong. Puff up the love and resist the guilt!
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Hey Art !!
How are you mate ??? thought it was time I started hubbing again !!
Yes this one did come from deep inside !!
Respect
Jon
A very emotional poem. Sounds like a product of deep thought.
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Hey !! Duffsmom, Great to see you drop in and thanks for a lovely comment
Love Simba x
Love it, beautifully written.
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Hi Hattie,
Thank you I am so glad you liked it !!!
Great to see you pop in :)
Simba
Really like this poem. :) Keep up the good work! :)
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