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Catch Me I'm Falling

Updated on October 27, 2011

Life is a mystery

I can't solve

full of secrets

answers elude me

questions keep circling

like Vultures picking

at my bones

success keeps running from me

failure I can catch easily

please the world

please no one

whose to say my destiny

isnt' for greatness

free me

release my soul

Catch me I'm falling

spiraling out of control

making wishes

that never come true

dreams turn into


close my eyes I disappear

open them again

the image screams

back at me

Catch me I'm falling

where will I land

is there going to be someone

there to pick up the pieces

that use to be me

put me back together

this time make sure

all the pieces fit

Catch me I'm falling

save me

love me

tell me I'm beautiful

heal me

complete me

don't abuse what's been

given to you

Let my spirit soar

Catch me I'm falling


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    • Nayothara profile image


      8 years ago

      Awesome! I enjoyed reading this HUB!


    • ShakethaM07 profile image


      8 years ago from Washington County, Georgia

      Words of a true writer. You have been blessed with talent that some of us wish for. You have a way with words. You can make your readers laugh, smile, feel tears of joy, happiness and so much more. I love you work and now im a fan for life. God bless

    • blackreign2012 profile image


      8 years ago

      brava!! I like the flow of this piece... You have talent ~hugs~

    • jvjones47 profile image


      8 years ago from Texas

      The vulnerability yet the desire to soar makes this a beautifully passionate poem. Thank you for writing this.

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      9 years ago

      How many time can one break a crystal. Sound like you are finding out. Again. Beautiful!

      The sadness is multiplied by the truth and hope in a better ending.

      Tim W

    • Daunte Loper profile image

      Daunte Loper 

      9 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Well done, i am looking forward to reading more of your work.

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      9 years ago

      caught you.......... lovely flow to this poem

    • Jess Killmenow profile image

      Jess Killmenow 

      9 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

      Desperation is palpable in this work. Yes, let your spirit soar.

    • EmanWarrior profile image


      9 years ago

      I love this one you tapped into your pain on this one. Good job!


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