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Celestial Rumours

Updated on September 27, 2012

Sunbeams kissed your shoulders

As you stirred beneath the sheets

Dancing on your sweet neck

And caressing your cheek


Your coffee skin turned golden

With kisses of the sun

Delighted by the whispers

Of our nocturnal fun


It knew where it could find us

To smile into our room

From nights celestial rumours

That were started by the moon

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      Surya 3 years ago from stoke-on-trent

      ha ha ah well thank you so much... cheers

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Hehe. You caught me there.

      So young and so beautiful! Blessings.

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      Surya 3 years ago from stoke-on-trent

      he he he ''the girl is charming'' manatita44 thank you...thats me btw...

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Sweet and romantic, like my own. I used to write them for girls. Perfect rhyming and great lyrics. Mostly I take a detour, now.

      I really appreciate your poem. The girl is simply charming. Related?

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      Surya 4 years ago from stoke-on-trent

      jon don ask me did i like it.. probably ask me hw much i love it.. who wil not like it.. its bful and really mesmerizing..

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Unakku idhu pidikkuthaa?

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      Surya 4 years ago from stoke-on-trent

      it was jus grt jon

      i ve no words'i read it so many times.. lovely.. muse..hhhhmmmm me... ahwwwwwwwwww lovely...

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      surya 4 years ago

      wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

      i ve gone crazy now..

      that sounded like wordsworth... my favo,,

      its beautiful "dancing on sweet neck"

      and happy to be ur muse

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Thanks Coffee :)))

      I think it's super cool mind you love these kinda things !!!

      Simba xx

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      My fault. I didn't look at your profile first when I read this poem. Cool, and though I enjoy your beautifully written poems, I feel for you feelings poured into them too. Take care.

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      Janis Leslie Evans 4 years ago from Washington, DC

      Lovely. Your words ignite strong images for me. Voted up, beautiful.

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Coffeegginmyrice, I would be honoured if you posted this on your facebook page

      Thank you so much

      Simba xxx

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      This is beautiful, cute and musing! Love it! I would love to share your poem on my Facebook page~ Passionate Poetry. Thank you, Simba!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Aw this is so sweet and romantic. Early morning delight always a pleasure after a wonderful night.

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      Girish puri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      from night celestial rumors, that were started by the moon. good imagination, voted awesome,

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Hey guys, thank for the comments :)

      I think this my favourite so far, with a wonderful muse ;)

      Simba

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      very good imagery!pretty poem!

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      AliceFSpencer 4 years ago from Texas

      This was great ~ perfect picture~beautiful

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      Linda Cassini 4 years ago from Las Vegas NV

      keep riting..coffees on :)