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Dark Poetry: Chaos Rising

Updated on June 13, 2013
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My hearts pacing 60 miles per second
At 3 o’clock in the morning
Rapid images flashing through my head
While outside the world is storming

Kinetic energy circling all around
With me at its source
Another night of tossing and turning
Cause my life’s been thrown off course

I pop another blue pill
Hoping to get some narcotic peace,
But peace has long since fled the scene
There’s no taming this killer beast

Rage and rejection
Flowing through my ice cold veins
A black-hearted demon
Ripping his way through my spiritual plain

I feel the chaos rising
I can hear my self scream
Awwwwwwww! Bloody murder!
Death has finally arrived on the scene.


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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      It can be both. He could have killed himself, or someone else. The big picture is he snapped under the stress of many sleepless nights.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Hi, Jose! I can't decide if he is the murdered - or the murderer..either way - VERY vivid!

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      I try to switch it up every now and then.

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      I feel this one is different for you and is reads so well.

      Voted up and awesome, Joyce. Remember to relax and enjoy this weekend.

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      The four barn cats of the Apocalypse. LOL!

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      PHILLYDREAMER..Welcome to my world..stress,chaos,turmoil,rejection..these are the names of my 4 beautiful barn cats...and each fits his name...loved the hub..I can relate as probably many others in our little group...nicely painted words...very creative..

      have a great week-end..

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      John Crowley 4 years ago from Sheffield

      Nice imagery. Good job.