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Updated on November 14, 2012

Poem written by cruelkindness


Hello, second glass this half my hand before the hour...

I thank you sacred mantis of monks in majestic lands that protect this potion of life

from the blue bloods internal stream of royal glowing flame that rein over my spirit

In my hand I have these secrecy of spirits that cast spells of delightful daze

with bright gauzy mist of ambient that ignite my soul's radiant lantern with force purpose

turning to strong illuminating chants of raindrop utters of majestic emerald hues

of surreal spices to elude the iced glass flourishing swirls of my sublime

my cup's soul of cubes wait again to float up in a kaleidoscopic cocktail

to continue In a sorcery of transitivity that keeps me in race to wait

on cubes to float again, certain they will further thicken these plots to escape my drinks.


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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      Imkarn23 - Ah taboo for me to cast the spells. I like to think venomous self-sabotage. Love your comments their like a gift for my thoughts.

      (Subliminally Thoughtless)

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      You do cast spells of delightful daze, sir! Daboja!

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida round is on me..cheers !

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      If we were at a bar, I would be ordering a round of drinks... Drinks can bring the best of memories and at this table I say lets drink to ease our petty stress and enjoy the moments that don't have a reason.

      kj force


      Gypsy Rose Lee




      Thank you all

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 5 years ago from Reno NV

      I love this poem, you were able to take me away from the drink and into the past, amazing journey. Jamie

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      picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      I've had many margaritas, but non described in such an eloquent way!

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Awe, I am so drunk =) It is exquisitely beautiful, such a colorful weave... Awesome, awe...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Don't know what it was maybe the mention of swirls and drinks and cubes but really reading this I got dizzy.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      mesmerizing muse of mind-loosed meaning ;)

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      OK..someone after my own heart..taking advantage of " Happy Hour" 2 fer 1...great job with Chartreuse !!!

      I'll drink to must really relish a challenge..