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Updated on July 27, 2014


By the freedom

Of it all

When sunset came



Love blooming

Newness emerging

A carefree freedom

That cannot be escaped

What it once was

Echoes of laughter

Singing in my head

The warmth of the sun

Transforming us

Into who we became


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      Demas W Jasper 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Not many of us online on Sundays, especially Sunday nights. This was a fine Hub that probably would have had more readers, if published on a weekday. I'm glad to see you are still "one of us" here!

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      Caroline Marie 2 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Hi Perspy, thank you for your kind comment. I don't think I'll ever stop being here! :)

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      Randi Benlulu 2 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Beautiful poem and sentiments! Thank you!

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      love the poem Caroline.. and those childhood memories do fulfill our adulthood ...:)

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      James W. Nelson 2 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Childhood--oh, the memories!

      Thank you, Caroline.

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      sky9106 2 years ago

      Love intoxicated by the it sets up the entire poem........amazing how the ways that we are similar as humans, dwarfs those ways, that we try to be different. I also wrote my Childhood.......Thoughtful here Caroline.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Childhood, memories that continue to spill over in our adult life. You penned the feeling/excitement so well...Thank you..

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      FullOfLoveSites 2 years ago from United States

      I wish I were a child all over again... lovely hub :)

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Lovely to relive the freedom of childhood. Love your poem.

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      Caroline Marie 2 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Btrbell for your lovely words. :)

      Thank you Frank for stopping by and your kind comment. :)

      Thank you Jim, aren't they great? :)

      Thank you Sky for stopping by and your kind words. I will read yours too. :)

      Thank you Ruby for your lovely words. :)

      Thank you FullofLoveSites I wish too. :)

      Thank you Blossom for your lovely words and for reading. :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Life is certainly intoxicating. Childhood memories are always precious. Thanks for the memories.

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      Caroline Marie 2 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Rasma you lovely lady. :)

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