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Cinderella Locked up in her cellar

Updated on August 21, 2012

Cinderella the girl they locked

up in the cellar, she rarely even

got to see a fellar. But fell

prey to her wicked stepmother.



She sat amongst the cinders and

scrubbed and cleaned and slaved

away. Yet they were so mean, she

wished that a magical dream could

come through to set her free. From

all her misery.



So finally she got invited to a ball.

She looked so radiant standing

In the centre of the hall she looked

up and saw him so handsome and tall leaning

against the wall, she blushed and blushed

until she almost fell.



The prince saw that she looked so well

he walked up to her and asked for a dance

oh she smiled! and he chuckled and they both

danced until the clock struck twelve and then



Cinderella ran like hell………………………..

You see that same Cinderella well she

did marry that handsome fellar and she

NO longer get locked up in that dirty cellar.

She now lives in a castle............


Written by: Joanna Chandler

Copyright 2011





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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      This is an entertaining write! Greatly enjoyed it!

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      Joanna Chandler 4 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hi Audrey i am happy that you liked it.

      God bless you

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Well I see I am still following you so I cannot imagine why I knew nothing of this...Oh well, it happens for others I follow too, maybe I should shorten my list. A fabulous retelling by a half-pint Cinderella. Up and sharing.

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      Rebecca Mealey 4 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      A cute little story retelling. What a good idea!

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      Joanna Chandler 4 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hi Jackie an Rebecca thanks so much for sharing and for the visit, seems as though when I post hubs sometimes my followers don't get it .

      Have a splendid day you two

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      schoolgirlforreal 4 years ago from USA

      Cute story and entertaining :) ;)

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      Joanna Chandler 4 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hi schoolgirlforreal it's a pleasure to read your comment.

      Thank you ;)

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      Word 2 years ago from Chicago

      Hi LadyF, Wonderful poem with a happy ending. I enjoyed it very much :-)

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      Joanna Chandler 2 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hey word thanks so much glad you did :)

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      bluebird 2 years ago

      This was very interesting, I liked how you took an old classic and brought it back for today, it was very cute and you did good girl!

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      Joanna Chandler 2 years ago from On planet Earth

      Bluebird you made me chuckle how you said an old classic , what a fine way of putting it over ,thank you much :)

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