Cold Heart
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Painful Betrayal
Cold Heart
Your stare chills me to the bone
You have a heart as cold as stone
Your mood is always a black tone
You always move within your hone
Such is your cold, cold heart
You’re not aware that is an essential part
A part that has been your art
Whilst you never
You take satisfaction
Whenever there is a faction
Such is your traction
Which derives from a person’s degradation
A person’s discomfiture
Gives you ultimate pleasure
You’re fond of inflicting seizure
Delights you beyond measure
Oh you’re like a starved snake
You’re comforting as a frozen lake
When will you stop this and make
A heaven here on earth at your own wake…
Comments
- AUTHOR
thank you again Barry...this was based on a true experience...
Outstanding! This is great, Racinwa :)
- AUTHOR
thank you lovedoctor for visiting for leaving a wonderful comment...have a great day...
Good imagery to describe a cold heart.
- AUTHOR
thank you caroline for dropping by...have a wonderful day...
This is very beautiful Raciniwa.
- AUTHOR
thank you Sueswan...but yes, at times people don't seem to realize our being human and be like the snake...
Hi Raciniwa,
"Oh you’re like a starved snake
You’re comforting as a frozen lake"
Perfect words and images of someone with a cold heart.
Voted up and awesome.
- AUTHOR
hello thinice...thank you so much for your wonderful comment...
A great poem, love the visuals it creates.
- AUTHOR
thank you cloudexplorer, that's why i was thinking could it be that i too have a cold heart? or was it written for an undue emotion?that thought still lingers on my mind if i am capable of such...
Wow, this one is very chilling to me, but I dig the cold & gloominess somehow, it embraces a persons hope that heaven awaits them, just by the very last lines. I'm not sure though if its for someone other than the person feeling such cold emotions though.
Voted up Raciniwa, thanks for sharing with me again too.
- AUTHOR
not yourself but your feelings and thoughts...would you rather keep a boiling water in your bag or would you rather let it out and let it simmer down?
i really don't want to share my self to others.
- AUTHOR
why are you out of speech...just express yourself freely here...
speechless?
hehehhe!
- AUTHOR
as i see you Coney you're not the person you think you are...because you take notice of how that kind of attitude affects others...just be yourself...thanks for leaving your comment here...
I really like the poem which encodes about a person having a "cold heart" or in other term a person having a no sympathy to others. It really reflects my own situation because I really don't give people's important towards myself but rather I'll just ignore it.I just realize that when would I stop this.Is it when I supposed to hurt others or when I used to let other feels that their useless.
The poem was really nice in which can inspire people to realize and make a better changes that can help not only themselves but also other people.
- AUTHOR
thanks Phoebe for dropping by...and i'm glad that you like it...
For me, this is the most wonderful poetry I've ever read. I chose this because, it's only a simple but a wonderful sayings
- AUTHOR
well, i think his life is in hell...but i still wish he will come around and realize that heaven is on earth...thank you...
- AUTHOR
well, i think his life is in hell...but i still wish he will come around and realize that heaven is on earth...thank you...
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well, i think his life is in hell...but i still wish he will come around and realize that heaven is on earth...thank you...
I love the last line, and making the connection between heaven on earth and (i'm assuming) this persons place in hell...awesome
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@Hunbbel Meer...thank you...actually i get the inspiration from a friend who was a victim of betrayal...
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@always exploring...thank you...it's been an honor...
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@Lyrikkw...thank you...anyway google is a rich source of photos...
Very beautiful. You deciphered a cold heart with extreme proficiency. Congratulations for using such well-equipped words.
Beautiful, You depict a cold heart well....
You have a nice poem. It is very deep. Nice photographs
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