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Come With Me
Come with me
Come with me and see
the world with brand new eyes.
I will hold you in my arms
and little deaths you'll die.
Come with me and feel
what it's like to have love.
I will hold you, kiss you
as the universe watch's from above.
Come with me and touch
my heart to yours.
I will wait patiently
until you open the doors.
Come with me and fall
into happiness and bliss.
I will take you from the pain
and seal it with a kiss.
Come with me and take
a chance on a world so beautiful.
I will make your dreams come true
and leave you a love so full.
Comments
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Thank you Don Balderas, I love writing, so many different words you can use to describe what you feel, blessings
Lines are soulful and beautiful. I love the 'little deaths'as part of the purification process. It must happen as life has to evolve for a better and higher purpose. Thank you for the verse. I love ya.
Amazing. Touching. I really wish to come along.
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You are amazing and as always love seeing your comments on my hubs. Thanks jadedlove
amazing words of love. Up and lovely or beautiful anyway. Love the images in my heart. thank you
- Author
Thank you blaise25, appreciate the kind words. i do hope to see more of you around, blessings
Just amazing.
I'll come with you..
:)
- Author
Thank you downpourofwords, I appreciate all comments. i have read some of yours and they are awesome. talented you are.
wow. Lovely poem. keep writing. Voted up.
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Thank you so much Eiddwen. Always a pleasure seeing you grace my hubs with your comments. Thanks for the time. Blessings
Great hub.
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