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Come With Me

Updated on June 11, 2015

Come with me

Come with me and see

the world with brand new eyes.

I will hold you in my arms

and little deaths you'll die.

Come with me and feel

what it's like to have love.

I will hold you, kiss you

as the universe watch's from above.

Come with me and touch

my heart to yours.

I will wait patiently

until you open the doors.

Come with me and fall

into happiness and bliss.

I will take you from the pain

and seal it with a kiss.

Come with me and take

a chance on a world so beautiful.

I will make your dreams come true

and leave you a love so full.


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      4elements 6 years ago

      Thank you Don Balderas, I love writing, so many different words you can use to describe what you feel, blessings

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      DON BALDERAS 6 years ago

      Lines are soulful and beautiful. I love the 'little deaths'as part of the purification process. It must happen as life has to evolve for a better and higher purpose. Thank you for the verse. I love ya.

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      Jaspal Singh 7 years ago from India / Australia

      Amazing. Touching. I really wish to come along.

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      4elements 7 years ago

      You are amazing and as always love seeing your comments on my hubs. Thanks jadedlove

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      JadedLove 7 years ago

      amazing words of love. Up and lovely or beautiful anyway. Love the images in my heart. thank you

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      4elements 7 years ago

      Thank you blaise25, appreciate the kind words. i do hope to see more of you around, blessings

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      Just amazing.

      I'll come with you..


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      4elements 7 years ago

      Thank you downpourofwords, I appreciate all comments. i have read some of yours and they are awesome. talented you are.

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      downpourofwords 7 years ago from Dallas, Texas, USA

      wow. Lovely poem. keep writing. Voted up.

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      4elements 7 years ago

      Thank you so much Eiddwen. Always a pleasure seeing you grace my hubs with your comments. Thanks for the time. Blessings

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      Eiddwen 7 years ago from Wales

      Great hub.


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