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Concrete Love~ A Poem

Updated on May 21, 2013
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Lupita is the founder of Vegan Health and Yoga and is completing a masters in holistic nutrition. She is also writing a novel.


Can love be more than what we feel

Something seen and not surreal?

Could it be as warm as sun gives light

Sinking down with colors so bright?

Or waft the aroma of blooming rose

To travel in whiffs into our nose?

Can it transform hearts into a bliss

With just one gentle perfect kiss?

It has the power to be received

From random kindness to one in need.

Surround us with familiar sounds

To make us laugh as would a clown.

From family and friends within our ears

Easing life to dry the tears.

Perhaps open a mother's heart wide

With arms that wrap her deep inside.

Shift her thoughts and change her life

As a committed and faithful wife.

Love is where we live our trust

That we're created from earth's dust.

Love does prove its not abstract

It tastes and sounds and feels exact.

Love is for certain all around

Like beauty breaking solid ground

It Can be seen, It Can be found.


Written by Lupita Ronquillo

© All Rights Reserved (c) 2013


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      LupitaRonquillo 4 years ago

      Yes it is Nellieanna and thank you for stopping by :D

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      Nellieanna Hay 4 years ago from TEXAS

      A lovely 'other look' at love as an entity, a reality. When one has it or receives it, it most surely is a reality!

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      LupitaRonquillo 4 years ago

      Thank you Mhatter99 :)

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for unfolding this wonderful thought.