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DONT MAKE A SOUND

Updated on March 27, 2010

Don't Make a Sound

Quietly – Quietly – Quietly

Through the grass I stalk

I’m lurking in the shadows

Where the unsuspecting walk

Silently – so silently

I sneak up on my prey

It matters not if it is night

Or in the light of day

Creeping oh so slowly

Shhh – shhh – No one must hear

Closer – Ever closer

No sound as I draw near

Little tiny steps I take

I must not make a sound

I am the bravest hunter

When no one is around

So slower still I’m moving

My steps are itty-bitty

And then I pounce right on that fly

Cause I’m a big brave Kitty!

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      Moneylady 7 years ago from Texas

      Thank You Ben Evans .... Spooky ......

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      Ben Evans 7 years ago

      Very nice with a wonderful twist at the end.

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      fishtiger58 7 years ago from Momence, Illinois

      LOL excellent poem and such a brave little kitty.

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      Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      Very quietly felt...

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      Moneylady 7 years ago from Texas

      Thanks Quill and advisor4qb ... Glad you like it! Have a Blessed Day!

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      "Quill" 7 years ago

      Cute...took me right to watching the neighbours cat...great hub girl...

      Blessings

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      advisor4qb 7 years ago from On New Footing

      Love it!