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Daddy's Love. Part Five; Together we stand!

Updated on March 3, 2012

Together we stand!

Up to the point when the police cars where parked outside and then the ambulance came, but it seems that by some strange twist of faith, circumstance beyond anyone other than, the Most High God’s control, everything turned out they way they did. For no one knew anything in any great detail.

Miss. Laura who moved to that community about a good twenty years ago, still don’t know who that the young lady that passed out in her arms was, but somewhere inside her, she became interested to know who she was and why was she here.

She had planned to discuss it with her husband to make a trip to the Hospital , where she figured that she would be able to kill two birds, with one stone, get to find out who that young lady was, and also see how the Jefferson’s were doing, as everyone was already praying for them.

After going through an ordeal like this one before that was not too pleasant, the neighbors had all refused to speak any reporters and has since posted notices on all doors accordingly. Everyone knew by now that all three people were at the, Good Samaritan hospital and two of them were their very great neighbors...

There were quite a lot of hustling and bustling going on all over the place, this normally quite community , usually except for kids playing in the playgrounds , the same playground all the neighborhood kids grew up in , and except for people at times walking their dogs, it was relatively always quiet.

Since the next day was going to be Saturday, it seemed as it the entire news department the entire camera’s people were seemingly camping out, trying to get a story, and everyone knew how relentless the news media can be.

They had already decided that they were not going to give any interviews, and now it seems because of these incidences , everyone and their brother was pulling up, in the community. There were Chinese, Spanish foreigners from all walks of life.

By using phone calls, all the community was informed some people children were even used to deliver quick notes to others. They needed to get together to have some kind of overall understanding , so that none will lose track of each other and what measures they are planning to take.

These are their and this is their community, they should be concerned. Based on what happened the last time with the death of the Jefferson’s two sons, the story was all over the news, and reporters were banging on doors at will. It was only because of the presence of the police Chief who lives in that same community, something goes done quickly, in the area of crowd control...

But the chief himself do not want the entire world to know exactly where he lives, for obvious reasons. Because of that situation which occurred before, the Chief agreed to be present at the planned indoor meeting.

There was so much attention given to this situation, it seems inevitable that something would get out of hand someway somehow.

The police had denied all access to the restaurant, and the hospital, but nothing was as yet done for the community. This case still a very active case, there were four people dead, a girl missing and up to this point, they had no answers.

They needed to question the Father; they most definitely had to speak with his daughter. The police who were at the house had did something rather unorthodox, but also wise, they had taken a photo of the all three members of the family without any authority.

All three was now at the hospital but no one knew, and because of the eye witness account by the police officers who were involved in the chase, giving their report of what could have possibly happened, because the chief was shouting that people don't die from "Nothing" and a girl in a car Do not just disappear” Or we are dealing with something that is truly out of this world, and I am not going to be the Fool telling this to anyone. He then said I need answers and I need them now, walked in to his office, and slammed the door.

The officers knew they were dealing with something rather special here. They actually would have done some kind of drastic actions already, had in not been for the doctors orders. They had already assigned a detective on duty 24/7 at the hospital post, waiting for the very first word on the parents. The took the parents were not the same officers that too the young lady afterwards, but something was not right. How much of a coincidence could that be, to have a girl in that community, on that same night as the Jefferson's hospitalization. The officers with the pictures decided among themselves to take a trip to the hospital to see that girl, so they left. What they did was against protocol and they were questioning themselves because that was not their decision to make.

The FBI had taken over were also asking many questions. They also already knew about the daughter being kidnapped they had asked for pictures had one on the way from the fathers job, he always had a beautiful picture of all three of them on his desk. They already knew that: Dad’s coming around and he wants to know about his daughter, that he requested a Bible, and started reading on the page what his hands had opened. What they did now know was the page it had opened on.

It was miraculous what happened. His fingers were on 2 Timothy 1:7. For God did not give us a spirit of timidity, but a spirit of power, of love and of self-discipline.8So do not be ashamed to testify about our Lord, or ashamed of me his prisoner. But join with me in suffering for the gospel, by the power of God, he was in awe, and stood up.

The mother is still quite out of it, breathing heavily, and the doctors said that barring some unfamiliar twist, that she will recover fully, all her vitals signs were good.

The daughter which no one as yet knows, is fine but still in some type of daze, somewhat out of her element, she is trying to figure out what happened before the bright light.

The two men are dead, but the police that were following, they too are all remembering seeing that very bright flash of light in the car, before it stopped.

That's the reason the FBI got called in, because both men had no marks of any kind on their bodies, and the cause of death can’t be announced or decided as yet. The men had no ID on them. The media is all over everyplace. The hospital, the police station, the restaurant, and also the Jefferson's home. But all this was about to changed to become even much stranger,

To be cont………………

Part six: A twist of Faith. Please note that the future will be much easier, as I learn to relate and link all the parts . That's why it pays to Walk good! There are five other parts waiting , enjoy the read. Give thanks..


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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      It will definitely come real soon Rose , should have done it last night , but there was a heavy presence in disguise and I feel them from great distances, I was called to attend.

      Soon God's Love and his blessings.

      Bless and sincere thanks Rose.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and interesting. Great job. Awaiting the next one.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Don't read it anyway different than I meant it while writing , it "IS" for you the very same strong advise I had always been giving from the day we met . I am never going to be that kind of person , Do onto others as you would have them do to you.

      I am proud of the distance you have come and even more so the attitude while doing it.

      Now you are assured , read it over again and see it for what it is.

      I can see many things long before it approaches , don't ask me how I can , but it works good for me . Now I will leave you homework; don't forget am older than you . Lol

      Have yourself a blessed day.

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      Mrs L A Gibb 6 years ago

      Thank you Sky. I wasn't really complaining about the mistakes. I just wondered if you had microsoft word and used tools LOL. Yes, there are writers that cannot see, read nor speak, I think I might be one of them, what with my one and half eyes, and one and half ears. Anyways, you knows I love your work.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks dear lady mrslagibb. So you will be surprised as I continue. Don't ever let typos or grammatical errors be you nagging concern , "you" are the chief in charge here , if you are aware that they will put a monkey wrench in you plan then by all means come up with your plan B.But there are writers who cannot see , read or speak. Where are you on the list. There is no fear here in what you do, remember life is not a destination , but a journey, and on that journey you are constantly trying to make things the best for yourself and you must never stop till that's accomplished.

      I don't ever look for errors in peoples work , I go for the meaning, correcting to make perfect for free ! Hope I saved you some time.

      I use tools and guess lol. It puts words that make me have fun.

      Bless sistren. Try to correct Sistren.

      You are a favorite.

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      Mrs L A Gibb 6 years ago

      Now! I am sat on the edge of my seat, I thought I got to the end, but no you got part six. You are making your readers all hungry for more. Voted up. I understood, even though you had spelling mistakes and run on sentences. Have you tried your Tools, Spelling and Grammar in Microsoft Word. Do you have Word?

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks Frank and thanks again. I went to your hub and it was gone , so not digging nothing I waited and I see you came through , so I would get to it in a minute. I have a great smile on my face. Bless.

      This one stayed in my head last night , so I made some notes and this was the end result this morning .

      Thanks as always brethren.


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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Lenzy , I think I see in your mind and I would say much more later , but keep in mind it's a thing of beauty . I thank you beyond what you can understand.

      I f3eel a great spirit,and let it shine.

      Thanking you sincerely, is me!

      Give thanks. It's obvious that I am smiling ,but it comes from way deeper than the norm.

      God bless and I await.

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      Lenzy 6 years ago from Arlington, Texas


      This one needs to be polished up for it to be your best. I would pull it off temporarily to correct the spelling, grammer and run-on sentences.

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      you are an able story-teller.. lightning struck twice as you say.. this was a good must read had to go up and awesome my friend..:)