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Short Story:Daddy's Love! Part Two: The Reality!

Updated on February 27, 2012

The Reality!

All that kept entering her Fathers mind was to pray, he kept asking God to watch over his little girl, he kept remembering his two sons who both died instantly in that car crash coming home from a football game, and now this, his only daughter, in this red car up ahead with two kidnappers, the reason, he still do not know and the the truth is , he really could not care about anything other than the safety of his little angel.

The 911operator who kept him on the phone had just asked him the description of the people. He said that he had only seen the one that was holding something to her neck; his measurement , was about her height which is 5' 9" and had a dark shades and blue cap, with blue jeans and a white and red T-shirt. All this time Daddy had no idea that the red color on the T-shirt was actually blood.

The 911 operator then said the police are right there; they already saw you and will soon notify you in their own way, at one of the up coming traffic lights. It was just a matter of about fifteen seconds, as he pulled up to the lights, there were about eight cars in from of him, someone knocked on the window and said are we are the police, are you Mr. Emanuel?

He said yes, and they told him to pull to the side. Which he did. The police said to him it’s going to get pretty dangerous from here, and your safety is always our primary concern, we got the entire situation in our hands, Sir you did a wonderful job and you must now trust the police. Yes, trust us to do our job.

He then said I do Sir, it's the reason I called 911. The police then said: thank you Sir, you can go home now, and we will contact you, he hesitated , but the had already left. Mr. Emanuel looked at the police and with the tears in his eyes he yelled: please bring by daughter home safe officer, please !

He had deliberately avoided all the beeps coming through on the phone, because he knew that it was his wife, the phone has been beeping since a few minutes after the incident, while he was on the phone with the 911 operator and it never stopped since, he wanted to wait until he got home, but being the loving and caring God fearing husband that he is, he called her while on the way, but even though he was devastated, he knew he had to be strong .

His wife then answered the phone, as soon as she heard his voice she shouted: Thank God! Honeys are you are you alright? He said yes, and I am coming home, and I will tell you everything, Ok! But before he could hang up the phone, she quickly said let me speak to Crystal, I have been calling her phone since I heard the news flash about those two people being murdered right there in our neighborhood Chinese restaurant, and I knew she had to pick up food! What was that you said you said Catherine? Who got killed where?

Ok I am coming I am coming he shouted and hanged up the phone. He could not stand to answer his wife right then, he knew his wife , and he remember clearly what happened after she heard the news of he boys being killed. I took months just getting her to accept they were not coming home , she almost lost her mind! So he was overly cautious in anything pertaining to her only daughter.

The phone rang and rang , he drove the fastest he could disobeying a few traffic signs and laws as he did, but he knew if there was ever a time, this was it, and he kept going. He knew something was happening, something apart from the Cops chasing the kidnappers, he also knew it was most definitely on the news at this time, because that’s where his wife got the information to begin with .

He pulled up to the house and ran to the door forgetting the keys in the ignition, he started to knock loudly on the door and also the windows, Catherine, Catherine open ope……………Cont…

(Part one)..

Part three coming up !


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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks Rose . And I too is glad that you like . We there is great news , It's our and I hope it lives up to the mark.

      Always a great pleasure reading your truthful comments.

      Give thanks .


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and interesting! Keeps you riveted to the page. Awaiting your next installment.

    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks mljd I think you will have a great time with it. Thanks for your always great words and positive outlook.

      May the Most High Bless and keep you and all yours every time.


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      mljdgulley354 5 years ago

      Wow I need to go back and read the first installment. Looking forward to the next one too.