ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel
  • »
  • Books, Literature, and Writing

Dancing on Raindrops

Updated on June 12, 2011
Source

They say I dance on rain drops
The sweetest dream I walk this night
Perfection is the only, for me

We toast champagne
Don crinoline and bustiers
Fishnets, too short, shorts and boots for mudĀ 

I see only round and new and glowing
Where lives metal, dirt and dead
And you see it through my grin

Every body a future friend
Every light a star
Every note a sole stirring melody

They smile and are jealous
I have left the real and current pain behind
I am aware that for this moment, I alone

Dance on raindrops

Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • Randy Behavior profile image
      Author

      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Cute. Not exactly... I'm a good girl.

    • profile image

      Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

      Hmm, I've never heard being on LSD at Woodstock described so elegantly.

    • Randy Behavior profile image
      Author

      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Well thanks Tom, always a pleasure. :)

    • Tom Rubenoff profile image

      Tom Rubenoff 6 years ago from United States

      Glorious jubilant energy! Love it.

    • Randy Behavior profile image
      Author

      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      As far as I know Nikki, Earthdance is held all over the World simultaneously.

      Hi Frieda, so very nice to see you round these parts! I always value your opinion.

    • Frieda Babbley profile image

      Frieda Babbley 6 years ago from Saint Louis, MO

      Love this much!

    • Nikkij504gurl profile image

      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      damn they need one to come to New Orleans. we have voodoo fest and stuff but ive never been to any of those, too expensive. too crowded.

    • Randy Behavior profile image
      Author

      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      They're better than just going to a concert because the experience is broader with stage art, costumes, freaky people and great music of course.

    • Nikkij504gurl profile image

      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      well ive slept in a tent before and i defintely have a high tolerance for alcohol. hmm never heard of these festivals but they sound aawesomee!

    • Randy Behavior profile image
      Author

      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Nikki you are welcome to come if you're not afraid of sleeping in a tent and can manage your liquor. Alas Earthdance, our favorite festival, got too big and has moved on too a bigger venue. But it was fuuuuun while it lasted.

    • Nikkij504gurl profile image

      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      sounds like someone i want to party with!

    • Randy Behavior profile image
      Author

      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Hi Tony, thanks for reading.

      Thanks MFB, minnow glances! Like that :)

    • MFB III profile image

      MFB III 6 years ago from United States

      A stellar moment captured in impeccable words, i felt like I was there, in fact I can see you in your fishnet stckings catching glances like minnows swarming upstream. Lovely write Randy~~~MFB III

    • Tony DeLorger profile image

      Tony DeLorger 6 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Nice imagery RB. Thanks for sharing.

    • Randy Behavior profile image
      Author

      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Greetings Ben. This is me at play at a festival. Thanks for the comment. ;)

      Hello Kenny. You rhymed for me how sweet you are.

      AIDY my dear! I so wish you'd reactivate your hubness and come play with me around HP!

    • profile image

      AIDY 6 years ago

      I love to reveling in your words. Empowering, as always.

    • kennynext profile image

      kennynext 6 years ago from Everywhere

      Dancing on raindrops takes so much talent

      I really love the way you write

      You will never be dragged down in the mud

      Your dancing is much too light

      great work

    • BenWritings profile image

      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Well well..what's this?

      This is a rabbit hole into your fine mind, I believe.

      How incredibly interesting...I had to read it 4 times.

      Fantastic. And that isn't just hublove, Randy ;]