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Dark Poetry--Lost Soul

Updated on July 14, 2012

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Dark poem, my rendition of a Lost Soul's final moments. This poem took 30 mins.

I hope that you enjoy this poem and Thank-you for taking the time to read this.

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Lost Soul

Dark shadows distanced bliss,

Armageddon’s solemn kiss.


Darkness against the dancing light,

Shimmering smugly hoping none will fight.


Creeping through the deafened mind,

Wishing silently the light shunt blind.


Engulfing crevices of the soul,

Burrowing deeply in the black heart’s role.


Melodies of sorrow plague the land,

Time now gone through the fallen sand.


Crying desperately for more time,

As the heart stops beating its usual rhyme.


Deepened depression seeping in,

The lost soul’s journey now “el fin.”

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      Linda Rogers 

      4 years ago from Minnesota

      Beautiful Dark and dripping with great metaphors. I too like to write dark poems. Their so freeing and exhilarating. Wonderfully written Patty. Sharing this on Pin, twitter and hubbers. Must be seen and read.

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      Sean 

      5 years ago from PA

      Well written nice imagery, tells a story.

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      mandarmk9, Thank-you so much for your kind comments!! I truly do appreciate it!! I am glad that you enjoyed some of my poems; Thank-you for taking the time to read them!! Again, I look forward to reading more of your Hubs!! Thanks Again!!

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      Mandar Karandikar 

      6 years ago from Ratlam, India

      Great poem again Patty. I love your poems. Keep them coming!

      :) Mandar

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      kumar, Thank-you sooo much!!! I really do appreciate the comments!!

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      kumar24894 

      6 years ago from Fuck of HUBPAGES

      Nice poem . Loved it.

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      @Ellen, Thank-you so much for the comment!!! I truly appreciate the comments and feedback...THANKS again!!!

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      Ellen Karman 

      6 years ago from medina, Ohio

      Patty Kenyon, I love this, great poem!

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      @Mhatter, THANK-YOU soooo much for the comment!!! Loved the poems you posted today!!! Well Done!!!

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      Martin Kloess 

      6 years ago from San Francisco

      nice work... a dance into darkness...

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      @billybuc, THANK-YOU soooo much, you have been so encouraging to me since the first day I started on HubPages!!! I do appreciate it and I truly enjoy reading your Hubs as well!!!

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      Bill Holland 

      6 years ago from Olympia, WA

      30 minutes? I couldn't do the title in 30 minutes! I am developing a jealousy. :) Great job young lady!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      @buckwheats, THANK-YOU, I truly do like the input!!!!

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      buckwheats 

      6 years ago

      incredible and moving!

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