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Dark Poetry--Ravages of War

Updated on July 19, 2012

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I don't usually write dark poetry, however, I was challenged by a friend to write a dark poem about a war based in ancient times and on the battlefield. I had to complete the poem within 20 mins. This was truly a challenge for me. Thank-you for taking the time to read this!!


Ravages of War

The fields lay wet with the bloody pride

several thousand beaten then died.


Slaughtered by those that were once friends

beaten down solemnly to no ends.


Forseen by those that parted with the treachery that unfolds

never such a time that betrayal holds.


Another day, another hour,

clinging to the spiteful power.


Even those that were once strong

their days now limited and not too long.


The seas have been parted, the omens told

all is forgotten because none is too bold.


To fight the beast that lay within

would betray those who fell in sin.


The heavens roar with a thunderous bout,

they march on regardless of doubt.


Slashing with their heathen ways

never again to see the light of day.

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    • SMonaghan119 profile image

      Sean 

      5 years ago from PA

      Very well written. Not often I come across a poem I actually enjoy versus just seeing writing talent behind it, your's is both. Nice job.

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      toknowinfo, Thank-you soooo very much for your very kind comments!!! I truly do appreciate it!!! Thanks Again!!!

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      toknowinfo 

      6 years ago

      Beautiful poem from a very talented writer. Especially that you put this together in 20 minutes. Thank you for sharing your creativity.

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      rcrumple, You should turn this into a hub so I can comment!!! AWESOME poem!!!!! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem as well...Thank-you, I do appreciate it!!!

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      Rich 

      6 years ago from Kentucky

      Unfortunate as it may be,

      man fights wars in air, on land and on sea.

      For religion, vengeance, even greed too,

      his battle's set, evil things he must do.

      His job is to kill and to survive,

      he's done his part if tonight he's still alive.

      War's not his choice, he's just a tool,

      politicians choose, it's their Golden Rule.

      While they sit safely on their thrones,

      and broadcast their words in deafening tones.

      And tomorrow the soldier faces his counterpart foes,

      It's a soldier's duties, a soldier's woes.

      Great job! Your poetry paints pictures as it tells a tale. It inspired me to jot out the above in minutes. Very good writing!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      @iamaudraleigh, Thank-you soooo much!!! I truly appreciate the comments!!! Thanks Again!!!!

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      iamaudraleigh 

      6 years ago

      Amazing! Written in only 20 min?? Impressive! I especially liked "The seas have been parted, the omens told all is forgotten because none is too bold."!!

      Voted up!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      @billybuc, Once again Thank-you!!! I love writing regardless of the genre...it keeps the creative juices flowing!!!

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      Bill Holland 

      6 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You are braver than I am; I don't even attempt poetry. Well done my friend; you are good at this!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      @SinnersChoice, Thank-you so much for the comments and votes!!!! I truly do appreciate it!!!!!

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      SinnersChoice 

      6 years ago

      I do have to say I like it. The fact that you wrote such a piece in 20 minutes is quite impressive..voted up, awesome and interesting keep up the good work

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      @epigramman, THANK-YOU sooooo much!!! I do appreciate the comments!! Warm wishes to you as well!!!

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      epigramman 

      6 years ago

      ..well it's amazing what the human mind can come up with inside 20 minutes or so and under relative pressure - most people would require a lifetime to wrtie something this good which means you are just a natural at this and a darn good storyteller too when it comes to narrative poetry

      with meaning and substance - sending you warm wishes and good energy from lake erie time ontario canada 9:09am

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      @midget, Thank-you so much for your comments as well as Welcoming me!!! I do appreciate it!!!

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      Michelle Liew 

      6 years ago from Singapore

      Patty, this should be shared with everyone who is thinking of fighting at all. It sends a strong message, wonderful imagery! And welcome to Hubpages!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      @josh, Thank-you so very much!!!! I appreciate the comments!!!!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      @ Ron, Thank-you so much!!! I love writing and my friends love to challenge me...lol

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      Joshua Zerbini 

      6 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Patty,

      I have to say that you have nailed this! And in 20 minutes? Excellent job, job well done! I am impressed Patty! Voted up, awesome and interesting and sharing. Keep up the great work Patty!

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      Ron Hawkster 

      6 years ago from United States of America

      20 minutes? That's pretty impressive!

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