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Dawn (tanka)

Updated on September 4, 2015

Dawn awoke again

Shedding hope upon the world

She whispered to me

Come out and find the magic

That I have waiting for you


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      Faith Reaper 20 months ago from southern USA

      Woo, I love this Tanka here ... so much is stated with few words. Excellent!

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 20 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Up, Awesome, Beautiful - I love it !

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      Shauna L Bowling 20 months ago from Central Florida

      Looks like he could use a break from hitting the books. What better way than some afternoon delight?

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      Dianna Mendez 19 months ago

      Reminds me of how I feel when I see the sunrise on the beach. However, the reference here is just as delightful.

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      Glenis Rix 18 months ago from UK

      Delightful, and clever :)

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