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Deeply Emotional Poetry: Breathe

Updated on February 27, 2014

I have a storm of emotions building up in me
I feel like if I don't find someone to give them to, I'll explode
My heart is desperately seeking someone to love
Someone to walk with me down this crazy road

I'm reaching out my hand to you
Knowing you probably think I'm out of my mind
But I'm still reaching out for you
Because I feel like you're my only life line

Please bring me down from these heights
Before my wings are singed by the sun
Maybe I'm crazy for rushing into this
But I have a feeling you're the one

Just let me love you
Let my heart give, what it wants you to receive
Please let me get this weight off my chest
So that I
Can finally


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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      And what a weight it can be on the heart. It will come my friend.

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      Ann Carr 3 years ago from SW England

      I love the rhythm of this! Lots of speed at the beginning, slowly running out of energy, out of breath, till you finally get it all off your chest.

      Great poem, telling it like it often is! Ann