ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

Departure:Two Shadows Too Long

Updated on April 30, 2015

On the water

From the bridge

At broken rays time

Two shadows

Too long

At pole’s apart

Stepping away

Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • Frank Atanacio profile image

      Frank Atanacio 24 months ago from Shelton

      very good my friend bravo

    • profile image

      christinemariezzz 24 months ago

      James,

      Lovely."From the bridge" I like that. To me, all 19 words unveil an imaginary familiar sign that directs a hearttale.

      .~ christinemarie

    • jhamann profile image

      Jamie Lee Hamann 24 months ago from Reno NV

      Your story has such depth and such precision. Jamie

    • James-wolve profile image
      Author

      Tijani Achamlal 24 months ago from Morocco

      Frank,

      Thanks so much for the comment.

    • James-wolve profile image
      Author

      Tijani Achamlal 24 months ago from Morocco

      Christine,

      thanks so much for the comment. I like standing on the bridge at the sunset. It' so beatiful.

    • James-wolve profile image
      Author

      Tijani Achamlal 24 months ago from Morocco

      jhamann ,

      Thanks for the comment.I appreciate it so much !

    Click to Rate This Article