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Updated on August 19, 2014
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The shallow pools

Where your hearts lie

You have no soul

Talking your big talk

Narcissism seeping

From your pores

I am tired

Of listening to your

Poisoned words

You talk a big talk


Where do you stand

Who are you really

You have no depth

Just a shallow soul

How dare you come


Where you don't belong

Go talk to ears that listen

There is no one for you here



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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago

      Hi Btrbell thank you so much! :)

      Hi Frank thank you for stopping by and for your powerful words. lol :)

      Hi Nadine, no one in particular, it just came to me. Thank you for your commenting and reading. :)

      Hi Ruby thank you dear lady for your kind words. :)

      Hi Eric thank you for stopping by and reading! :0

      Hi Blossom thank you dear lady for reading and stopping by. :)

      Hi Wayne thank you for stopping by! :)

      Hi Rasma thank you for your kind words and for stopping by. :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Lovely poetry with strong feelings. Love the picture.

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Yes, powerful piece! Thumbs up.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      What a great image to begin your poem, and inspirational it really is!

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      Eric Dierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Inspirational in it's way and profound. I like it.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Perfect pic. for this deep piece. Awesome!

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      Nadine May 3 years ago from Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

      Wow who are you addressing this to? Very powerful.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      enough is enough... yes powerful stand up and fight type of words in your poem.. and I love the serenity in that swan... awesome

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      Randi Benlulu 3 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Powerful words. Makes me want to cheer! Up+