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Desperate "4D" Attention

Updated on March 4, 2018

Such a cruel touch, a cool twist
Two dreams certain you'll feel this
A destiny only extreme to bliss
We sit back only to imagine
The way you feel to slowly reveal......

The desperate touch we mourn for,
For only your attention to feel
Such a cruel touch, a cool twist
of morals for love we wish

To see in a dream to relieve
the pressure building to scream
At the heartache you left for me

Desperate "4D" attention
And that's all you see, redemption

Such a cruel touch, a strange mist
off in the distance, sure you'll feel this
Measurements of insanity you endure
You pretend as if you're all that matters

In fact to me you're at the bottom
of a ladder that's untrue

A destiny only extreme to bliss
A treasure I bet you wish to feel this

Uncertainties pleasant but desperate..
For any and all attention
As long as it's all yours
A closed book of a Whore

That made such a good mans-
Heart turn so black & sore
You'll continue to be the same
You'll never change

You're desperate for attention


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    • DomShadows profile imageAUTHOR

      Dom Shadows 

      10 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      cruelty is never cool.. I just write how I feel man..

    • DomShadows profile imageAUTHOR

      Dom Shadows 

      10 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      mist..what do you mean? My work is growing on you?

    • DomShadows profile imageAUTHOR

      Dom Shadows 

      10 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      almost everything I write is lyrical poetry format.. I use be be a metal writer... Now I just do all kinds of shit..

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      Cris A 

      10 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      Why do your poems read like songs? Cruelty is never cool - unless sang in poetry as good as this.

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      10 years ago

      yes i reiterate my words mate, you write well and with feeling. Strange as it may seem with this type of verse, i get great enjoyment by reading your creations. keep it up mate.

    • Dim Flaxenwick profile image

      Dim Flaxenwick 

      10 years ago from Great Britain

      Loved it! Tell it like it is , man !

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      10 years ago

      Great expression, the words give impact to the reader of how women often take advantage of men, by teasing, taunting, rebelling and whining when if they would only grow up, and act like adult women, life could be so less complex. I'm the opposite of this, (thank God) but, I can relate to other women I know who use tactics which are unnecessary head games to keep a man under their thumbs. It's a clear, cruel common thread that makes men tired.

    • DomShadows profile imageAUTHOR

      Dom Shadows 

      10 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      yes indeed. and I like getting comments from you.. Not because you're half naked either.. =)

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      10 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      this is a very cruel poem... for somebody ! I liked reading it though! :)


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