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Destinys Defeat

Updated on November 5, 2010

 

You lay there sleeping

A peaceful slumber

No worries about you

Nothing left to wonder

 

Years have passed

Mistakes were made

Your perfect score

My failing grade

 

You opened my eyes

My heart and my mind

A love never known

Never expected to find

 

My soul wasn’t pure

My heart barely beat

Your standards to high

My destiny – Defeat

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    • Wayne Brown profile image

      Wayne Brown 7 years ago from Texas

      An interesting mix of perspectives for the reader to draw from this verse...nice work! WB

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      NikiiLeeReyes 7 years ago

      Love this poem; I want to see more of your work; very nice!

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      prasetio30 7 years ago from malang-indonesia

      Beautiful, simple and understanding. Thanks for share with us. I love your poem. Good to see you here.

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