Dimming Hope
A Sneaky Daughter
I had originally written the first 2 paragraphs of the following poem and saved it to my phone. My lovely daughter was being nosy and found the poem on my phone. She thought it was so beautiful and saved it to her phone without telling me she had done so.
She had asked me about it and I explained to her that it was not finished yet, she asked if she could try to finish it and I was more than willing to let her try; after all having my 11 year old daughter interested in poetry was exciting to me! Here is our joint effort poem.
The light was seen From afar A glint of hope That shining star Fog roles in Fading light A glint of hope lost in the night Stars so bright Up above Beautiful girl Smiles with love Broken heart Broken wing Felt love Now the sting Love has fallen Love has gained Her love will never Be the same Now goodbye for her Goodbye for him Now her life Will soon dim