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Disappearing From Existence...A NiaG Poem

Updated on December 5, 2011

Here I am, do you see me

I'm where you last left me


Standing on the edge of the background

No I'm not gone I'm still around


My voice echoes through your mind

You think I'm still there but I'm fading through time


I dream of friendships with someone new

Though long for those that I once knew


Did I force this distance, was I the one to change

If only I could stand in your gaze again


Time pushes on now I must go

The shell you once knew now you no longer know

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      NiaG 4 years ago from Louisville, KY

      Thank you so much Elizabeth99. Glad you enjoyed it.

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      Elizabeth99 4 years ago from Milwaukee, WI

      Beautiful.

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      NiaG 5 years ago from Louisville, KY

      Awww, thanks chuckbl. I don't think they're all sad so far. Sorry. Some do give you a little chuckle. Thanks for stopping by. Have a great day!

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      Charlie 5 years ago from Scotland

      I really enjoyed this, you have some very good talent, I look forward to reading more of your poems. Hopefully they won't all make me as sad as this one :P

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      NiaG 5 years ago from Louisville, KY

      Thanks rebeccamealey. :0) That's kind of you to say. They come to me in the morning and if I don't write 'em down I forget 'em just like that. That's what getting older does I guess. Ha! Have a good day!

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      Rebecca Mealey 5 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      Your poetry is lovely...It flows so well and so full of meaning

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      NiaG 5 years ago from Louisville, KY

      You're exactly right Carlon. It is somewhat of a test. Even in high school I only seemed to surround myself with those that are lasting friendships. Which I'm thankful for in someways I guess. Those that I kept up with then and in college I still talk to today but we're still distant and not as close as I would like.

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      NiaG 5 years ago from Louisville, KY

      Thanks SimpleGiftsofLove! I sometimes feel this way since I've moved to KY. I only seem to keep in touch with my friends in TX when I visit which is about once a year. We get so busy in our lives it's hard to keep up with each other.

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      SimpleGiftsofLove 5 years ago from Colorado

      Nice job again, Nia! I get this one, up and beautiful!

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      Carlon Michelle 5 years ago from USA

      Funny how time and distance changes some relationships but others when the friend returns is like they never left. I think that's how we know who was there for the season for a particular timeperiod in our lives and who are really the kindred spirit that become part of us for all eternity. Smile!