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Never Ending Cries For Help

Updated on March 4, 2011
 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Awkward Silences Remain. 
Depleted Perfection. 
Reasons Can Never Be Known.




N one of us are
E ver safe from the truth
V arious masks unveiled 
E veryone falls victim
R ebel, or be swept away

E ntertaining ideas of
N eglect and
D iscouraging the use of
I nstincts. Living life…
N ever realizing the 
G ood inside each other

C ompromise for me
R espect my humanity
I nside us all
E mptiness and fear
S ymptoms of the Fall

F aithful meet
O pposition
R eaping the world
    
    G I V E   M E   F A T H E R,  
    I   H A V E   S I N N E D.
    G E T   N O T   M Y   H E A R T.

H ate
E nvy
L ies
P risoners 





An aura of chaos.
Disorder walks among us. 
Space without direction. 
Building defenses.
Hiding daylight. 
A storm approaches. 
Static air. 
A distant Monster. 
Flickering sky.
The dead are living. 
The living are dying. 
I strive for an answer. 
But I know I’ll die trying
 
 
 





 
 
 

This was originally done on paper, as a creative writing piece, combined with artistic design. The words were laid out in a fashion very similar to the way it appears here. It was one of my most unique and different ideas.


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      BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      BELLA thank youuuu :]

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      This is very beautiful! Amazing and voted up!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      An acrostic poem with real meaning and beauty. Awesome as your poetry always is.

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      lendy 5 years ago

      I thought that was really cool and interesting.

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      BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Thanks so much Ardie :] this was a very old one that I unpublished because it got so few views. Thanks for sharing it !!

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      Sondra 5 years ago from Neverland

      This is my most favorite work by you yet. I'm going to share this over and over until everyone either reads it and comments or blocks me :)

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      QudsiaP1 6 years ago

      The resounding conflict between the believer an his self, the need for absolution, you have captured it beautifully.

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      the best works of art come in those state of minds. when we are at our worst our best comes out.

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Thank you Mentalist, Genna, and Nikki :]

      I was in a crazy state of mind when I wrote this, like many of my pieces.

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      this is awesome, therefore i rated it so!. good job. I want to write one lol

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      Genna East 6 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Not only unique and creative, but a fascinating read. Well done!

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Relying on instinct takes maturity,though simply to breath before a thought or action is the instinct that anyone needs can rely on and is often forgotten,as stated in this authentically creative verse,BenWritings.;)

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Wayne thanks, I have read 4-5 of yours and already greatly look up to your talent.

      Yeah, this was a very different concept for me, and I liked the way it turned out. I have always had a fascination for rabbit trails.

      The concept of branching out multiple paths/ideas from a common starting point.

      I have another one of these, on paper, that leads into possibly hundreds of different directions. Way too complex to post online.

      Thanks again and I hope you read more of my poems

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      Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas

      Very creative with the down and over thing...also has a strong message of truth to it as well. Good job! WB

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Thank you both :]

      winepress, i have no clue how i write anything of mine. haha, it just happens. thanks for the compliment!

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      Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon

      This is beautiful and unique :D glad to be a poet ~ welcome to hubpages. ~~LET IT FLOW~~ "quoting Cris"

      Uriel a fellow hubber and so called poet

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      winepress 6 years ago

      Oh my God! you are a genius! How did you do it?

      winepress