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Dream Was Over (tanka)

Updated on August 22, 2013

The dream was over

Those vast waves which brushed his shore

Had lost their color

Still he thanked morning’s angel

For the moments to enjoy


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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Very dramatic, intense, reflective piece.

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      Voted up +++ and sharing

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      Congratulations Martin on this well done Tanka. Jamie

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      Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

      There's always something to look forward to.

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      DJ Anderson 3 years ago

      Memories are all that we are left holding.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      There are always moments of joy to see us through the bad times. A wonderful tanka.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very beautiful Martin...

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      Lovely poem, Martin.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      The sounds of truth are remarkable.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Real nice. Enjoyed.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Those moments can be very special. Lovely poem.

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